ScandalousPhoenix

Helo Flowerteen! So this poem really isn't a poem at all. It is just a punctual statement. A "whimper" if you will onto the "bang." Try adding more stuff to ...

Hello! I love the idea of being compared to a candle. Quite bright if I do say so myself. So let's get this started. I liked this poem but at ...

Helllo Emmylou1995, I really really liked this poem! I absolutely loved the repetition of phrases and words. This gave me chills. O_o You used different words, strong words. The fluency ...

Hello Imtheceao! I am going to review your poem you got here. I am not sure if there is supposed to be a deeper message here, or if it is ...

Hello! Scandalous Phoenix here to review for you! Okay let's get cracking. All in all, this was a good poem. None of the sensory words repeated, which was good. Also, ...

'Ello Btm1, ScandalousPhoenix here to edit your piece. Overall, this was a good poem. It explained how it was to be a Japanese during the bombing of Pearl Harbor. But ...

Helllllllllo ScarelttFire! I liked this poem, the meaning was good. But there didn't seem to by any places where I could actually pause. Intake everything I just read. So like ...

Helllo BrokenSkye. I love this poem. This just truly hit my heart. I really loved how the emotions were put as nouns, instead of an adjective. But one thing you ...

'Ello GeeLyria! Tis ScandalousPhoenixx heree. This poem is really neat and yeshh. So I will do a review. I don't have NEARLY the amount of experience as others do on ...

Hola Shoaib, ScandalousPhoenix herreee to revieww for you! :D Lets hit this off. I liked this. It had strong vocabulary and the breakage was good. Made me think about some ...

Ayyyee Uncletyoyo, I am going to review you hope you don't mind.. This poem holds a lot of meaning, but I felt as if it just wasn't expressed enough. I ...

Helllllllllo Scandalous Phoenixx harrrr! ;) I am going to review this for you so yepp. Overall, this was a good beginning of a story. It was very captivating and easy ...

Heyyy Umaima! I am new here so I am not a 'professional' reviewer person but I will try my best! This poem held a deep message but I seemed to ...

Heyheyhey BandGeeekk101! Found you :) Well uhm, I am new here so like I don't really know what to do for reviews. Well, I will get to it. I like ...

Holllllaaaaa I am new here so this will be a rocky review at best! This poem is really great. It captivates the reader, and we are able to relate to ...