ScandalousPhoenix

Hello! I haven't been on this website for a while so forgive me if I don't make sense a bit... :) "The Flowers on my window have died. In a ...

Hello! I liked the fluency, it was really nice! The word choice was also good but I think there was a formatting error, with the no stanzas thing? Separate it ...

HEllo! This is a very humorous poem and I really like it! I liked all the allusions and imagery! You have a sweet sense of humor, especially the last line. ...

Hello ForeverRebel! I liked the repetition of "you're my best friend." It really sent the idea flowing that you did not want to love your best friend. The metaphors were ...

Hello! For starters, I really liked the idea of this poem and how you got it rolling. I liked the repetition which clearly states your idea refreshed, and at parts ...

'Ello! First off, wow. Beautiful. This literally took my breath away. All the metaphors and imagery... this was phenomenal. So uplifting! I will try my best to edit this but ...

Hello! This was a lovely poem. Personally, I like the darker genre of poems more but every one needs a change sometime!! :D So let's get started, yes? The idea ...

Hello! The shortness of the poem was good and you got your point across which was lovely. The metaphors completed the piece. But I feel as if you could break ...

Hello! To start off, this was beautiful. Wow. You let us know exactly what you felt in less than ten lines! I wish I could do that -.- You may ...

Hello! I really like the conflict with yourself in this poem. It kind of displays the modern teenage-ism around the world. It had great metaphors but the flow was a ...

Hello! ScandalousPhoenix here to review for you! Well first off, I liked the essence and the idea of this poem. It shows your view on this and that people are ...

Helllo Misstoria! I really liked the idea of describing Las Vegas. There is constantly life in the city, wherever you go and you basically captured the essence in this poem ...

Hello!! :3 Let's start. During this whole poem while reading this, I never felt as if it was about Peter Pan. I felt a bit more pain, more injury in ...

I love this poem. It has a nice beginning and the ending has a twist I haven't seen in poems on YWS before. I like it. The poem was very ...

I really like this piece. The tone is very harsh, which in my opinion goes with the message you are trying to put out there. But the word choice is ...