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Hello, Tiny Dancer! Reise here to do some reviewing. Corrections Highlights/Removals I don't want to see them, I don't want to talk to them, I don't want to write about ...

Hello, Joca! Reise here to review your work. I hope you're satisfied. Corrections Highlights/Removals First of all the size of this font really bothers me. I don't know how it ...

Hello, Reason! Reise here for a review attempt. Now, I review as I read so keep that in mind when going through this. Corrections Removals/Highlights Remember; we didn't order take ...

Hello, Dark! Okay, first of all I love your narrator's voice. I love the emotion behind my piece and you accomplish what some writers fail to do and that's put ...

Hi, Fluxy! Okay, so I can't review on the technicalities on this poem without sounding rash and uneducated (which, in this topic, I am), but I will try to my ...

Hello Laura, I agree with everyone above me about the whole paragraphing spacing thing but, other than that very small thing, nothing seems to be in the wrong with your ...

Hello Wolfdancer. I'm going to get the corrections over first, okay. I saw people as glass, created in all shapes and sizes, and had with the ability to survive amazing ...

Hello, Locked Library! To start this off let me just say that I really enjoyed reading this. It was short sweet and to the point. Along with that, though, it ...

I will replace this comment with a proper review in the morning when the sun comes up again. I just watched Insidious and really shouldn't have read this in the ...

Hello! I don't review much poetry, mostly because I'm not sure how poetry should be properly constructed, but I will try my best. Your rhyme scheme is very simple, an ...

Hello, Kaka. Haha, I really like this one. I think every writer has those moments where this poem would fir it perfectly. Yeah, I hope to slap my muse a ...

Hey, Karr. I really liked this and it was good. The only things I really have to say about it is this: * Try spacing your stanzas or else the ...

This was really beautiful. This poem holds so much emotion and so much truth it makes it hard, for me, not to like it. My favorite stanza is the last ...

Hello Popa! This was really short but got straight to the point and was really interesting to read. Thogh it was not the longest poem, it is still very nice ...

Oooer! First word that came to mind. This was an interesting read. The whole thing about the spaghetti was kind of funny. I don't have any corrections about it since ...