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Hi, Writer! Wow, oh wow. I knew something strange was going to happen just because of the weird calm in the beginning, but I didn't think it was going to ...

Hey, Niraco! I'm going to start off with some grammar corrections because nit-picks are a thing that I do. Your opening sentence is a bit weird on the tongue. Long ...

Hey magpie! I dig this. There's something about the line "and magnificence visits" that gives me goosebumps. I agree with you about your ending though. For some reason things seem ...

Hey, Traunt! I can't detect a rhyme or a rhythm here. Even free form poetry has a certain tempo to it, something the reader can follow and something that makes ...

Hey, Money! First, it's usually customary to start a new paragraph when someone starts or stops speaking. It helps to break up the paragraphs, and organize conversations so that everything ...

Hello, CuriosityCat. The first thing that strikes me to say is that there are different ways to express emphasis. Usually, using all caps is not a good or acceptable way ...

Hello, random combination of numbers! First of all, just a few nitpicks to bother you about. I stand in my armor with my shield , to the left of the ...

Hi, Jae! Let's give this a shot, okay. First I'm going to make some suggestions towards changes you could make in order to get this to read better. All of ...

Hi, Indiee! Wow, I really didn't know what to make of this of first. I knew I liked it for some reason, but my feelings weren't all the way in ...

Hello, Karzkin. Okay, let's get these pesky little nitpicks out of the way first. ...not much of it was worth losing. If something isn't worth losing, then that means it's ...

Howdy, Panda! First of all, I can not - refuse to - believe that you wrote this masterpiece in under an hour. Amazingly beautiful writing, honestly. I was taken aback. ...

Hello, Erin! Okay, nitpicks first. I first had sex when I was sixteen , and it was painful and uncomfortable and I could not shake off the thought that someone ...

Hello, DarkRaven! “Hello? Is this Dr Paul?” I said over the phone as I was pacing around the porch at the front. I wasn't going to address this at first, ...

Hello, sapphiredawson! I'm going to assume that this entire piece is in italics because it's representing the narrators thoughts. If that's the case then you don't need to put everything ...

Hello, Skye! Wow, this is the first haiku I've seen today that is an actual, proper haiku. Congratulations, dear. What I love about this is the message that it's sending ...