Saruka

Heya VegasLights! Saru here to review your poem! Your title, "The Wilted Rose" and the comparison to the rose in the end matched up, but the first two paragraphs compared ...

Hi harry576! It's Saruka here for a hopefully helpful review on your poem! First off, it really touched me. I could feel the desperation through a simple, formal letter, and ...

Kimmy! Vegas! Yay! You wrote a poem together and it was great! I'm just here to review it ;) Several times throughout the poem, you capitalized the second part of ...

Heya Aubrey! Saruka here to leave a hopefully helpful review on your poem! When you left you made so many feel doomed Since you wrote 'so' earlier in the sentence, ...

Heya GirlWithATypewriter! Saruka here to leave a hopefully helpful review for your poem! Throughout the poem, you consistently type 'ur' and 'u', but in the last line, you write 'your' ...

Hi Leela! I'm Saruka here for a hopefully helpful review of your poem! Wow. First off, this was great. I loved what it said, and it reminded me of something ...

Heya, screamingsloth! It's Saruka here to review your poem and hopefully be helpful :3 You wrote several times about the girl afraid to do something to the boy, but when ...

Heya Queenie! It's Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! In the first stanza, you said, in the picture I think it'd be kind of hard to capture all this ...

Heya! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'll be reviewing as I reread, so I'll start at the beginning. In the second stanza, you wrote, she is by no ...

Hi Aubrey! So this is the final product of your narrative, I love it! I'm here for a hopefully helpful review. Meanwhile, Sarah was pacing around her dark purple bedroom ...

Hi Spartan 118! I'm Saru, hopefully here to give a helpful review. I do mainly review poetry (don't know if they're all good or whatever) so here goes! Is it ...

Hi Jacquelyn! Saru here for a review of your poem! I'll review as I read, if that's okay ;) First of all, I don't think you need that picture. It ...

Hi there Tamilwriter, and welcome to YWS, by the way! I'm Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! First off, your title, 'Love', seems a little clichéd. Maybe change it ...

Hi there Maddy! Saru here for a (hopefully) quick review! Jenna checked her phone nothing. I feel as if this would be better phrased as, "Jenna checked her phone. Nothing." ...

Hi there, Remembrance! Saruka here to review your poem! I'm going to review as I read, so here we go! First off, you wrote, Let your hair loose, flowing freely ...