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  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Removed

    Hey! This was an.... interesting story. BUT in a good way. It kept me on the edge of my seat and it was suspenseful all the way to the end. ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken Girl

    Hey! My favorite part about this is the ending. It was really dramatic and I felt the emotion that was there. I felt like you didn't keep with the same ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: aging love (to last a lifetime)

    Hey! I think this was a beautiful poem and I love the form of it because I thought it really flowed. It was a superb poem and I found a ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Tree

    Hey! This was a really cool short story. I think it was interesting how in the end you compared yourself to the tree. I believe your last paragraph was your ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: 3 a.m.

    Hey! This was definitely a really cool story and it kept me on the edge of my seat. It was an interesting concept and I like the horror of it ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: my personal hell

    Hey! This is a really interesting way of writing this story. So obviously it's an internal struggle for the writer. I think it had a lot of personal thoughts and ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: She Likes Girls

    Hey! I feel like it could be longer and I think that that the characters and the setting could have been explained a little bit better. I think it's a ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fear

    Hey! I like the topic that was chosen. I mean fear is a great topic because it's relatable and everyone experiences it. I mean I think that it has great ...

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: misstep

    Hey! So this poem sounds like it has deeper meaning then a lot of people would probably catch on. So let's get to it! So obviously there are roman numerals. ...

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Battle Field Of The Mind

    Hey! This poem has a different topic then I'm used to, which is good! I like the "ACTA NON VERBA." It was different and it really stuck out to me ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Found

    Hey! I'd like to say that this poem is really meaningful! In the beginning I liked, personally the immediate sign of deep emotion. It can relate to anyone. Now in ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: how was your day?

    Hey! I'd just like to begin with how good this poem is and the best thing is that I can really relate to this poem. The emotion and everything about ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wierdest Philosophy of Life

    Hey! This was such a good poem. It had a really deep message that was relevant the entire time. I really liked it. It had good rhyme and rhythm. There ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Marshmallow Man

    Hey! I thought that was a really deep poem. I think it could really be related to anyone and I think that's great. You used really good words. I think ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: A Day on The Playground

    Hey! Cool story. Though I feel it would have been better if there was more description. I didn't understand when Carter sang "Good luck to me," I mean it was ...

    Dec 19, 2016


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