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Re: Removed
Hey! This was an.... interesting story. BUT in a good way. It kept me on the edge of my seat and it was suspenseful all the way to the end. ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: Broken Girl
Hey! My favorite part about this is the ending. It was really dramatic and I felt the emotion that was there. I felt like you didn't keep with the same ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: aging love (to last a lifetime)
Hey! I think this was a beautiful poem and I love the form of it because I thought it really flowed. It was a superb poem and I found a ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: The Tree
Hey! This was a really cool short story. I think it was interesting how in the end you compared yourself to the tree. I believe your last paragraph was your ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: 3 a.m.
Hey! This was definitely a really cool story and it kept me on the edge of my seat. It was an interesting concept and I like the horror of it ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: my personal hell
Hey! This is a really interesting way of writing this story. So obviously it's an internal struggle for the writer. I think it had a lot of personal thoughts and ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: She Likes Girls
Hey! I feel like it could be longer and I think that that the characters and the setting could have been explained a little bit better. I think it's a ...
Jul 22, 2017 -
Re: Fear
Hey! I like the topic that was chosen. I mean fear is a great topic because it's relatable and everyone experiences it. I mean I think that it has great ...
Dec 21, 2016 -
Re: misstep
Hey! So this poem sounds like it has deeper meaning then a lot of people would probably catch on. So let's get to it! So obviously there are roman numerals. ...
Dec 21, 2016 -
Re: Battle Field Of The Mind
Hey! This poem has a different topic then I'm used to, which is good! I like the "ACTA NON VERBA." It was different and it really stuck out to me ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Found
Hey! I'd like to say that this poem is really meaningful! In the beginning I liked, personally the immediate sign of deep emotion. It can relate to anyone. Now in ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: how was your day?
Hey! I'd just like to begin with how good this poem is and the best thing is that I can really relate to this poem. The emotion and everything about ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Wierdest Philosophy of Life
Hey! This was such a good poem. It had a really deep message that was relevant the entire time. I really liked it. It had good rhyme and rhythm. There ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Marshmallow Man
Hey! I thought that was a really deep poem. I think it could really be related to anyone and I think that's great. You used really good words. I think ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: A Day on The Playground
Hey! Cool story. Though I feel it would have been better if there was more description. I didn't understand when Carter sang "Good luck to me," I mean it was ...
Dec 19, 2016
