Sarah24

Hey! So this is a really interesting topic. It was a really funny poem about a little boy. Anyway. It had a good flow to it and it was organized ...

Hey! So I noticed only one mistake! It was where it says Before overthinking left me panicing. Panicing is spelled wrong, it's supposed to be panicking. Anyway... So this poem ...

Hey! This poem really struck me in a way I didn't think it would. There are no spelling mistakes so good job, but there are a few grammatical and wording ...

Hey! This was a really interesting kinda of poem. It was open about what the writer did in the past and acknowledges the fact that it left their body sore ...

Hey! I really liked this poem, it was suspenseful and it was descriptive. I didn't understand why you put question marks on all the sentences if not all of them ...

Hey! As previously mentioned (I'm sure you're sick of hearing it) is that you need to make it longer because it needs more details and you need to perhaps describe ...

Hey! So this is a really deep poem and I think it's really good! The only bad thing that I have to say about it is that you didn't keep ...

Hey! So although I liked the eerieness (that's not a word but bear with me here) of it, but I noticed that there are several spelling mistakes so just make ...

Hey! This was a really interesting poem. It was kinda deep and humorous at the same time. The only mistakes that I saw was to make sure that you capitalize ...

Hey! This was truly an uplifting poem. It has a decent flow but it could be a little better. Now for a few grammatical and wording errors. You will always ...

Hey! This poem kinda confusing when reading it. I must say it has a nice flow and the rhyming pattern was good until the end. Now for a few details ...

Hey! So this poem obviously has a lot of emotion which is good for poetry. I have small critiques...I feel like your rhythm wasn't there and there really wasn't a ...

Hey! I thought this poem (coming from an athlete) was very inspirational and maybe motivation for others not so athletic. What struck me the most was definitely the repetition. It ...

Hey! This is a BEAUTIFUL poem about what it's like to have an eating disorder. It really describes the thought processes of someone who does. And as someone who has ...

Hey! In the first sentence you say: It's dark, lonely, yet still in a way, peaceful. I feel like you didn't need the word still in the sentence. The next ...