Hear Me Now

Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review.

This poem is so powerful. It's like an anthem which soldiers sing before going to the battlefield. In today's world, where everybody is fighting for supremacy and trying to defeat the other through words as well as physical might, this poem can be considered very important and relevant. After all, how can the world trust us if we ourselves are not ready to do so?

Other than a spelling mistake in the fourth line of the fifth stanza (you wrote "faught" instead of "fought"), the poem did not have any grammatical error. It was well-phrased and punctuation marks were used wherever required.

Now coming to the actual content of the poem. You were able to express your feelings and views very well through these golden words, and I think that is the most important quality of a good writer. The title of the poem "Hear me now" complemented it's contents. It showed that we should stand up on our own feet and start walking on our path to the future immediately, for, everything in this modern, competitive world happens in accordance to that old saying 'Might is Right'. I think that was the message conveyed by the poem as well. Keeping it short and simple instead of beating around the bush made its message stronger, clearer and easier to relate to and understand.

Overall, it was an amazing work. My eyes were on fire when I read those words. It's so full of truth, life and young energy. Loved it! Keep up the good work!!

Hey! This was truly an uplifting poem. It has a decent flow but it could be a little better. Now for a few grammatical and wording errors.
You will always be faught for ----> faught should be fought
Others are too. -----> It could have a But in front of it
You may be in pain, -----> There shouldn't be a comma there.

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that's it. It had a good flow and it was a nice poem for anyone that is struggling. Just watch your spelling and make sure you don't add commas when they don't need. But this poem was really uplifting for those who are really sad and are feeling as though they have no one with them. There are so many lines that really hit home for me and it showed that though the world may be against you there is still someone that it there and there is always someone who can see the good in you. It showed how people, although some may put a cover on, can be soft and sympathetic and they can show love and respect. I feel like this is a poem for someone who is surrounded by people who have a cover on that doesn't show emotions and this would truly show them that that's not right and how there are so many people in so many communities that can love you for you. This is a great poem and I hope to hear more from you! Keep writing <3 <3

Sarah24

I must say that this poem is excellent and very encouraging and inspiring for those people who feel they are odd and always stand out from the rest and feel sad of life. The theme you have chosen is very well developed in your poem. I like the way you have just chosen different images to tell the reader not to feel alone.
I especially love the part when you say "you are loved always by somebody out there". It really conveys the fact that human beings have the capacity to love others and be loved by others. Then it was a great idea of yours to separate the verses, making the poem easy and flowing to read.
Well done!