Samsal

Ah Sageleaf I was trying to explain what it feels like when you see someone dancing and you feel like you could join them, I cant look away from the ...

This was very nice. I loved how it ended and good for Jake for sticking with her. How did you do in the contest? Great story, nice ending and I ...

Wow I loved it! Why does it have to be a short story though? Im already dreading the end...I want it to continue. Good job and im looking forward to ...

Wow this was seemed to have a lot of emotion. i wished he discribed Alister to his sons more, give them some history, state how soon after Alister's death did ...

Dedication shows, Perspiration leading to success.

Thank you to all those who commented. It really helped and I really appreciate it =)

this story was quite interesting. I didnt want it to end. I love how you modernized the story of sleeping beauty. Great dialouge too. Cant wait to see where this ...

yeah this was interesting.I like how you went along with something that could happen in the book. this was very well done and i really could picture the characters saying ...

thanks for all the advice on how to make this poem better thank you

this poem is nice short and sweet and i wouldn't have guessed that u were talking about although it is also the title good job very interesting poem

this was nice. touching. yeah i wasnt sure if there was a rhyming scheme at first either but it was very sweet.=)

thank u both...

thanks for your input. it means alot. :)

ummm...not bad. could use some work but still very good and well put. is it just me or is there some spelling errors there?hmmm. good job. anyway=)

not bad, though Shine is right about the seems to carry a sweet melody with it and it has alot of potential. great job and keep up the good work.