Sam

Willow...I know I've commented on this countless times, but you have a very elegant style of writing. And your work is a nice break for us critiquers, having to go ...

wow liz...you really have a knack for poetry. Your poems are usually very wierd on the surface, but very, very beautiful underneath. I think this is one of your best ...

I have to agree with everyone else. You have a great poem going here, it just needs to be longer. 'You don't live in your own fairy tale/You live in ...

Wow. Okay, I know I've read this before, on AIM. But I just needed an excuse to read it again. Now, for pointage reasons (lol) I will tell you what ...

Hee...I'm flattered. Somebody's been reading my stuff...lol Wow. For being 11, you rock at the whole romance thing. Now, for some 'what i liked'... 'I feel a tingle run along ...

Awwww.... Why does it have to have a sad ending? *cries* Emma, this is very good, like your Rachel pieces. I'm looking for something to critique on, 'cause we prose ...

*blinks stupidly* I've never heard of the guy... Sabine, after reading a couple of your poems, I've decided you're one of my favorite poets on the site. Your poems are ...

oooh.. Another great rhyming poem. Well done, guys! Not too Lucky the Leprechaun. Anyway, I thought this poem was really good. Beautiful, more like. I really wish I could give ...

No ideas for names, sorry... Anyway, I thought this poem was really good. It was kinda reminiscent...pleading...yeah...and not too old-ladyish like many poems of its kind. Only thing, don't use ...

I'm ba-ack...*smiles evilly* I have way too much time on my hands...:roll: Anyway, this poem was probably the best one of yours I've read so far. One of my pet ...

This is going to be a poem you really have to be committed to working on if you want to make it work. A ton of people have this type ...

And what was that one thing you found that you like? *duh duh dunnn* I like the basic IDEA of the poem, but you don't really seemed to have grasped ...

I thought it was OK, for just getting back into it. The only thing i noticed was that you get kind of weak...boring, even at the beginning, but at the ...

'I’ll never know but the summer my mother died and the summer my father abandoned me I stopped loving.'- Uhm...this is so...soap opera. Change this a little bit so it's ...

Eh...kind of indifferent. Not the best poem you've written, Firestarter, but not the worst either. the fourth stanza just kind of reminded me of Blink 182. 'all the small things, ...