Rydia

Hello! I decided to review this one first, hopefully that's a good pick, but I'll probably review the other some time next week as well! Maybe on Wednesday to test ...

Hey Grif! I have to agree with you on your first point: Adelaide is spot on. She's just brimming with all the wit and intelligence which I've come to expect ...

Hello! I'm going to start with some specific comments and then aim to give my overall thoughts :) Specifics 1. I held onto Lute like I was going to drown ...

Hello! First, I want to say that I love the opening to this and the tone you've got - that very simple, understated voice - is beautiful. It really helps ...

Hello, dear! It feels like a long time since I've reviewed anything by you, but here we go... Specifics 1. I think the first sentence is a little fragmented and ...

Hello again, buddy! I thought I'd take a look at this one too :) This, my friend, will simply be beautiful

Hello! Firstly, my apologies for taking forever in getting to this. I don't review very often these days, but hopefully it will have been worth the wait... Specifics 1. I ...

Hello! I'm going to start with some specific comments as I read through and then aim to give my overall thoughts at the end. Specifics 1. Great start: your first ...

Hello! This looks like a good piece to review :D Specifics 1. I'd like to talk about your first sentence. I realise it's not the first of the novel, but ...

Hello Darling! I am here to review your satiric writings once again ;) Specifics 1. I love that you've set this in Broadstairs is my first thought!

Hi there, welcome to YWS! I'll start by giving you some specific comments as I read through and then try to summarise my thoughts at the end. Specifics 1. My ...

Hi Nate, welcome to YWS! I'll give you some specific comments first, as I read through, and then a more general overview at the end. Specifics 1. A very strong ...

Hello! Please note that I haven't read the previous chapters, but this looked lonely so I've come to review :) Specifics 1. Even though I hadn’t really listened to Mother ...

Hello, dear! I decided one of your poems should be the first thing I review on review day :) I thought things were supposed to get better in time I ...

Hi! Sorry this has taken me so long to get to, but here I am now :) Specifics 1. You’re riding on endless trails and endless fields. Seeing nothing but ...