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Rydia

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Disputatores- Chapter 5

    Hullo! I've not read the previous parts so if I say something you feel is covered in a previous chapter, please feel free to ignore me! Specifics 1. The opening ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Too Blind Too See

    Hey, I'm finally here to review the poem! Sorry it took a while. 1. Interesting title. I'm not sure yet what it means but I'm intrigues by the 'too see' ...

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Am

    Hey Lightsong! I want to start by saying that this one has a beautiful rawness to it and feels the most emotional of your poems so far. It has a ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As Frail as Snow

    Snow! So Ican see now that your poetry folder goes in reverse order of oldest to newest, whooops! But this one's newer and about snow so hai again! Specifics 1. ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The Colours Shaped Me, Father

    Poem number two! Yay for colour poems, I wrote one of these for a class exercise once and it's one of the few poems I actually like from my school ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Why, oh Why?

    Heya! I'm in a poetry kind of mood today so thought I'd start here :) Specifics 1. You don't get many words in poems so you have to make all ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Falling of the Sands

    Hi! So this has taken me far too long to get to for which I apologise but here are some thoughts: Specifics 1. Silently stretching I grope at the distant ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: For Sale

    Because breaking the RevMo bar is apparently cool I am totally here to review this! Kind of. Alright, let's go - Line one: These two words are very simple but ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sunset

    Prepare to feel totally honored that you are getting my 50th review this month! Which really means you're my 50th victim... Specifics 1. I sometimes like starting poetry with a ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: {Title}

    Hi Questio! So this is cute. I kind of like poems that are clever and make use of word play and poetic techniques to make fun of themselves. Specifics 1. ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chasing the Wind

    Hola! I reviewed a lot of fiction during review day so I decided I'm going to linger in the poetry forums for the rest of the month :) Specifics 1. ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Beach

    I like visual poetry and I'm feeling a little reminiscent about my experimental writing module so this is right up my street! Specifics 1. The pad thing hasn't worked or ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: All that you do

    Hullo! I'm going to start with some line-by-line comments and then try to give you a few overall thoughts at the end. Specifics 1. It's difficult to know from the ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dirty knees, cloudy skies

    I've seen this title around a lot and I'm still not sure where it started but anyway it seems to be some kind of trend and the theme of the ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dreams

    Heya! I've always been fond of poems about dreams because they're something I find really inspiring so I thought I'd take a look at this. Maybe you could make the ...

    Sep 27, 2015


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality