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Re: Snowflake
Snow is one of my favourite things in the world so the title caught my attention immediately but maybe add an extra adjective or something to make the title more ...
Apr 25, 2016 -
Re: June Haiku
So I have to write a review (and how have you posted so little!) but then I saw this haiku - or two - and thought I'd give it a ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: Burning Eyes
Hello! So I'm meant to be writing a poem at the moment but I'm not feeling too inspired so I figured I'd put that energy into reviewing one instead. Specifics ...
Apr 23, 2016 -
Re: Untitled, Chapter One
Hello! I'm going to avoid reading my previous review for now and see what strikes me about the chapter from a fresh viewpoint. Specifics 1. I think the first sentence ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Brink Of The World- The Walking Dead - Fanfiction- Chapter #1
Hi, welcome to the site! Fan-fiction isn't normally my first choice but I love The Walking Dead so I thought I'd take a look :) Specifics 1. The first paragraph ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: The girl
Hi buddy, buddy... Specifics 1. I'm not sure if you need the third line. That one's very telling and I think the solid descriptions you have in lines four and ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 22.2
Specifics 1. I'm not sure I like how casual they are about the death of the meka. From what we've learned so far, this is a really important position and ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: Among the shadows the leaves sleep
Hello! I'm in a poetry kind of mood so thought I'd take a look :) Specifics 1. I think your second line is too long and it's hurting the flow! ...
Apr 18, 2016 -
Re: .
I'm not a huge fan of fan-fiction so I probably won't read more than one of these but I saw you were looking for reviews and I thought I'd oblige! ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: A Response to William Blake's "The Tyger"
I'm a fan of the original so thought I'd take a look at this! Specifics 1. I like that God and flawed don't quite rhyme in stanza one, just like ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 22.1
I'm going to be away this weekend so I'm drafting a few reviews to hopefully post and not lose my team tortoise position. That means you'll probably not get this ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Upside - down
Hi there, nice to meet you. This poem is very fun and I could definitely see it in a book of children's poems or even on the wall at a ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Intuition
Hullo! Thought I'd take a look at this... Specifics 1. I'm not sure how I feel about the opening line being a well known phrase. It's familiar and that may ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: Only One
Hello! It's been a while since I reviewed a song so I figured I'd check this out. Specifics 1. Before I start reading, my first observation is that you haven't ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 21.2
I'm waiting for food to cook so you get (most of) my attention :p Specifics 1. Who would fight? he thought, as they ran past the town hall. The street ...
Apr 14, 2016
