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Re: The Shadow~ Prologue + Chapter 1 Updated 7/30/13
Well, seeing you looked it up, I made up the Homo Flacus. It's a species purely my own. I'll make sure to put up a thing on what they are ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: The Raven 2
Hmmm.... This was sorta of like The Raven... But it's different in it's own way.. It's pretty good.
Jul 22, 2013 -
Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate
This is very random.... But I like it!
Jul 22, 2013 -
Re: Vampire Crushes
Thanks! I was trying to think of a reason for the wings and what popped up? Edgar Allen Poe is what XD. Thanks for the review.
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Vampire Crushes
Thanks for the advice! I'll make it longer! This story was a lot of fun and I hope it was fun to read!
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Vampire Crushes
Well, I'm not a Twilight wannabe. I'm keeping it at Vampires. There's a reason he's a vampire. I haven't even READ Twilight.
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: My Inspiration
This was good. I think it could be a little longer however, but overall all I like it. I like the second part the most, and I think it's good. ...
Jul 16, 2013 -
Re: They Will Never Understand.
Ayden, you're gonna be okay. I stumbled upon this, and I had to comment. You're gonna be okay, make that character if you want. Write with red paint. Not blood. ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Back In Black
O.O thank you! I love Rock and Roll! *is also a heavy metal freak*
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: Locket
Ohh, I love this! This is really amazing! I love the description and how it all flows... I really like it, I can't find anything wrong, spelling wise... Well, Happy ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: You, Are Anything, Everything, Never Nothing.
Ohh.... I see Ayden in this everywhere... Alrighty, remember spaces after a comma... I really like this Ayden.... Another excellent poem from you. I really like it. Well, I can ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: .
Ok. I think we need more. How is darkness in us, other then life? How can darkness be pure? How is darkness, dark? How is it in us? How does ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Shadow
The Shadow is not dangerous, he's the hero.... I don't think you really understood it.. Maybe you should re-read.
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: Silly Me
O.O Gee your falling in love? This was unterly interesting. You are silly. :P I can feel some of the emotion, and how tangled it is... I hope to see ...
Jun 25, 2013 -
Re: The White Canvas
Ohh.... I see this, this must have a looot of meaning. Perhaps more description? And colour can be color, and it's usually spelt that way, but it differs so. Maybe ...
Jun 25, 2013
