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Re: please stay
Hello, SarukaTheHuman! I don't think I've ever read any of your poems before! I'm just going to jump in with my nitpicky ways and critic it bit by bit. The ...
May 9, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 4 (rewritten)
Hey, marms it's Keep here for another quick review. I liked this chapter as I think it adds to the characters a bit more. We get to see a little ...
May 9, 2017 -
Re: Fireball's Fireball
Hello, ChieRynn! Keep here for a quick review! I'm not a very big fan of fanfiction I know I'm so punny because it usually isn't very good. I, however, found ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: I******** POEM
Is the......... is the WHHHHAAAAAAT! Hehehe (: Hello, alliyah! Keep here for a quick review! I must say I commend you for capitalizing the first word of every stanza. If ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Aschenputtel Chapter 3
Hello, DragonNoir! Keep here for a review... I'm trying to become a knight of the green room and this was just the work to help me get closer. I'm not ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Truthfully fiction: One moment in a million othersbu
Wooooow... I haven't been wowed by a short on YWS in so long. Yes, there are very well written works on here, and longer one's at that; but length and ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Give Her Wings
Hello, @Dreami! I'm continuing my "Review Old Works Project" and your poem is my next victim, muahaha! Just kidding. I as well as you love horses, and this poem involves ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Summer Wine
Hello, Keep here! I know this work was posted a very long time ago. I know I shouldn't be reviewing it because it'll annoy someone. But I also know that ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Long Sleeves
OMG, OMG, OMG, this was absolutely magnificent! It almost made me cry! I got teary-eyed! This poem is so underrated and deserves to be a part of my "Review Old ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: My Poem
Hello, Drizzt! This was interesting...I can't personally say I liked it but that is only my opinion based on emotion. It's actually quite a good poem... XD Lying there, in ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: untitled
Hello, Kay! Keep here for a quick review! I've been doing this thing that I came up with just now XD called "review old works project! And it's definitely fun ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Oni
Hello, aisu_ookami! Keep here for a quick review! I've been doing this thing that I came up with just now XD called "review old works project! And it's definitely fun ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: "Roses"
Hello, Tessitore! Keep here for a quick review! I've been doing this thing that I came up with just now XD called "review old works project! And it's definitely fun ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: The Gates
Hello, Keep here for a quick review! So, I know this was written in 2004, and I was only a child then but, I've made up a "review really old ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Elysium Chapter 1 [Part 2]
Hello, Elesium! I know you requested this review the LONGEST of times ago, but I had left the site for a year, and was sad to find un-reviewed works that ...
May 3, 2017