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Re: When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.2]
Hello Lightsong. This story was very interesting. I liked the drama you made her give off and I'd really like to read some more of the this story. What's going ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: A Beautiful, Wonderful, Completely Normal Beach Day for All
Hello EnderFlash this is Wonder from the Phi team here to review your work. :) I thought this was a very original idea and the characters were funny and amusing. ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Light and darkness
Hey captainearth. I'm here for a review as requested. I hope I didn't have you on pins and needles waiting too long. :D I will try to make this as ...
Aug 24, 2015 -
Re: A Letter From Hell
Hey don. I'm very surprised at you! XD Maybe you should put a little effort into this. ^^ I was expecting a rather long and hurtful letter but all he ...
Aug 22, 2015 -
Re: On A Metal Platform
Hey Hatt, WW here to review. I enjoyed this it reminded me of Groundhog Day and many others that seemed similar to this. The idea although already taken is very ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 6 - The Song
Hiya, Sharrae, Wonder here to review your work as requested. I thought this was all very cool like the others and it made the story even more mysterious the way ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: Rainbowing.
Hey NicolMemo. You asked me to review this but I never got around to it, so sorry!!! Anyway, this was really cool. I can relate to Circly a lot about ...
Jul 2, 2015 -
Re: Under the Blanket of Stars
Hey Dreamer4ever15. I thought this was kind of cool. The idea was fun and you went straight into the story; also I loved the description you added to this piece. ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 3 - The Friend
Hello Sharrae, since Im your stalker, I might as well be helping you with you your story. (Hehe, sorry it took so long). So, I really liked this chapter it ...
Jun 20, 2015 -
Re: Be Yourself
HEY CAP!!! Hehe, it's me....(in case you didn't guess >.>). I really liked your poem I thought it was whole hearted and you really lightened up my dark room. You ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Shiny Black Shoes
Hello don! It's me Nunya. Hehe. (I can't believe you still call me that!) I liked your poem very much, if fact here's an example: YYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY! Hehe. This was clever. ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: I Am Sorry
Hello ishitadutt. Here for a review as requested...sorry it took so long. I really thought this poem was beautiful. You tell the reader how you're sorry for the way you ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 2 - The Cabin
Hello. Wonder once again! Oh my gosh Sharrae this was fabulous!
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: Diana
Hello. Wonder here. I thought this poem was beautiful and very emotional. The way you worded every stanza just wept towards all hearts. And I'd like to help you do ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: Capitalism Rap
Yo, my man, wonder here. Captain. I see you rappin'!!!
Jun 4, 2015