RubyRed

Hello, Tammi. I kind of liked this at the beginning but when you got to the end the punch faded. It wasn't as strong at the end. I think you ...

Hey, NerdBird. I'm here to drop off a review, as requested. This was very entertaining. What the story looks like is a robbery or hijacking. It is very amusing and ...

Hello, MemoryHunter. I decided to stop by and review your work, since I'm trying to clear out the endless Green Room. This was very amusing. I thought it was very ...

Hello, Lightsong. I can't really say I enjoyed this. It wasn't what I expected especially since it wasn't poetry. Poetry has a rhyme and beat to it. It doesn't have ...

Hello again, Alice. This was nice but a little short since you didn't rhyme but it was okay. I enjoyed your poem "Coffins" more since it flowed and had a ...

Hello, FrameOfMind. I took a look at your other song but didn't quite like it as much as the lyrics in this one. I can't say much about the words ...

Hello, Swordfish! The format of your writing was very fun and eye-catching. Let me help you out here as much as I can though. First, you didn't capitalize anything and ...

Hello, Tammi. I enjoyed this but I don't think this passes as a poem. I don't mean to sound uncaring or judgmental but you should work on this. There isn't ...

Awwww, this is so adorable. I love how you brought me back to my childhood memories only in seconds. It was really, really cute and had a childlike feel to ...

Hello, jwgil20. Just hopped by to read your essay. This is very persuasive by the way. I found myself agreeing with you by the end of your paper, which doesn't ...

Greetings, cakerissa. Just came to drop a review, as requested. The story is actually really cool. And the idea of a mermaid is one I've always wanted to write about ...

Greetings, DrFeelGood. I'm sorry it's taken so long to get back to you. I don't think I got the notification. Please, accept my apologies. Anyway, to the review. This wasn't ...

Hello, Nightshade27. I feel you like you could use another review. So, here I am. The rhyming was very well thought out. I didn't have to stop and go back ...

Hello again, smartdog90. I like this poem so much more than "Moms Can Be Annoying". It rhymed and flowed better. And I can definitely relate to this which is funny. ...

Haha, that's really funny. I can get really angry at my mother sometime too. I liked this poem till I got to the end where you said: "I'm on my ...