RubinLikes2Write

holla! make sure that you really stress that this is a fantasy story. Like allot. Because right now it seems like a non fiction story with typos. If this is ...

Good. It was a little slow and at the begging part of her dream their were some improper sentances. I think I would like the story more If I could ...

I don't mean to be rude but it sounds just like a bad knckoff of Twilight and just like twilight it's not a memorable read and I couldent careless about ...

hahaha omg i love Pink and Kiki!!! Ha!! I was cracking up when Pink beat Sophie up!!! I could totally picture that in my head! Very nice job! I liked ...

Heyy! Nice story! One thing that I'm curious about is what did Lady Komiko look like? And could you see any features of Pink that wasnt dirty or bloody? Well ...

aw this is really sad :( but good. if this really happened to you then that really sucks. I sympasize with you! okay just a couple of things...(I'm the least ...

good job! i know how it feels to have a weird dream and try writting it down... anyways! First of all i would try giving your characters less pedestrian names. ...

haha i like this story!! At first i wasn't sure but the more i read the more i liked it!! I liked how you had the princes Cinderella be totally ...

Heyy! to me this should probably go to science fiction but its up to you of course! I got a little lost at some parts. Especially when it jumped right ...

I think this is a fairly interesting story.. however i would put more thought into it. Not thought like it was poorly written but what did Imo think of Zoey ...

wow!! really intriguing! pm me with the next ch. i wasn't paying attention to spelling but that was good only 1 thing explain why Juno didn't feel in the mood ...

I haven't even read the story and i can tell i already like because its 100% sparkle free Okay now ive read the story and WOW!! Thats really good! Tho ...

The two sentences, “Ya then I won’t have to hide from the police any more!” “Ya it’s been almost a year since you ran away from the orphanage and it’s ...

this is a really well written story and since I'm still new at this I won't criticize your work because I will most like come off as someone who doesn't ...