RoyalHighness

Royal here for a quick review! Like Adrian, I can't really spot any huge flaws here but I'm not sure whether it's due to sleep deprivation or your amazing talent. ...

Royal here to review! So this was interesting, but it had some problems. Namely, that the images were all entirely different from each other, and almost completely disconnected. The flow ...

Wow. Wow. Royal here with a review. Which is to say Royal here with a WHAT DID I JUST READ okay I'm fine I'm fine. I hope you're not looking ...

Royal here for a quick review! First, welcome to YWS! I don't see a lot of story synopses here, so it's a welcome change! So first, a quick typo: you ...

Royal here for a quick review! I loved this! Very sweet, adorable, and original. Two things: I don't think you need the line about not wanting sex. I think you ...

Royal here for a review! I loved this. The characters are three-dimensional and well-rounded. The dialogue is a smidge flat, but it reveals a lot about their personalities, which is ...

Royal here for a quick review! So, this was alright. I thought the repetition was well-intended, but misused. I think the repetition of the imagery is necessary, but the repetition ...

Royal here for a quick review! Overall, this was an evocative poem with very simplistic rhymes. Personally, I'm a bigger fan of polysyllabic rhymes, but I do appreciate the shorter, ...

Royal here for a quick review on this fine Review Day! Love the choppiness here. It's really working for me. Personally, not a fan of using capitalization on every line, ...

Royal here for a review, as promised! Alright, so I'll make this pretty short. It's a busy day, after all. Overall, pretty good. There are some small spelling mistakes and ...

Royal here with a review! Content! I liked this. Eerie and sparse, like the landscape. Not much to comment here, except that the concept was interesting. However, I think the ...

Royal here for a review! WELCOME TO YWS I'M VERY EXCITED TO MEET YOU okay let's get to work, shall we? Content Wow, this was great! Awesome attention to detail, ...

holy GOODNESS I CAN't. Royal here for a review! Which is really just me ranting about how much I loved this. Eerie and beautiful and heart-rending and chilling. Easily one ...

Royal here for a review! I'm always down for poetry that involves language and punctuation. John Donne's poetry is a great example of how powerful punctuation and diction can be, ...

Royal here for a review! Also, welcome to YWS! Let's get to work. This was generally well-written, but it has a few problems. "Frontwards" is awkward. I'd replace it with ...