Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well, as far a previews go, this one is a little bit of a sandwich, I feel like only the first part and the last part actually appear to be talking about the story, and the second feels like its discussing something else entirely but hmm, it was interesting.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Klai was a mamma’s boy. As a child, he was extremely sweet and playful: just a normal kid… well- other than the fact that he was purple.
Okay...as far as previews that's certainly a first for me, I've never run into a situation where someone's just introduced as a totally normal person that just happens to be purple, well its certainly an interesting detail there, got my attention right away at any rate, soo...well let's see what this intro is all about then, shall we?
This is the life story of Klai: a man who shows up in the background of most my other stories and usually plays a small yet important role in them. Because he is at the back of everyone else’s story, I was not going to write his own, but Klai has enough fans asking to read his story that I decided to make it available to the public. For those of you who are knew to this character, he is a dragon-humanoid creature that lives in the fantasy worlds of the OhPal: a magical elf-like race. Among Other Things, Klai Was Purple is a somewhat serious drama revolving around people: their development, and lives.
Hmm, well that sounds like you've got yourself a proper interconnected universe of sorts judging by that, this seems almost like a introduction to your writing in general rather than just the story of this one person, but hmm, well it certainly does sound interesting, I do love characters that sort of seem to exist in everything and tie everything together
Klai’s various adventures include dealing with being the only person of his race, sacrificing his dream for the sake of someone else, discovering new unconventional ways to achieve his dreams, helping his king brother cover up royal scandals, protecting his family from a monster, and inter-dimensional bar-tending.
Hmm, so this is I believe the part where you actually go ahead and give a preview for the story itself, and well, this is cool, a collection of plot points that if you manage to fit into a single story could certainly make it really cool. This Klai fellow sounds like he could certainly be a person who's done a lot in life and can do a lot in life and has been through a lot as well. Well, I would certainly read this story if you post a chapter of it.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, a pretty cool and pretty interesting character that you've got here, and his life story sounds like it could be quite fun to read.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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