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Re: Black Fire - Prologue
Hey Confused Glasses, I loved your writing. I find it is similar to what I have read and how I write, which I like a lot. Even though what you ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Hi. Have we met?
Hey Wolfare1, Great poem! I love the way you included the parenthesis. It adds another level of insight into the person this is about. I feel like many can relate ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Snowball
Wow I really like this. At first I was just thinking in my head you shouldn't live life thinking 'If I never' type of thing. But the ending completely changed ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: The Things I Do (Section 3)
Sorry for reviewing so much all of the sudden but I really just had to read all of these and now I can't wait to read more. Like I said ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: The Things I Do (Section 2)
On to the second, haha. Anyways this one was just as good and still left me wanting to read more. The only thing I would suggest is going through and ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: The Things I Do
Oh my gosh I love this! :-) But to backtrack first I saw that you had done a review on one of my pieces and I like to return the ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: I Stole Your Words
I love this poem it is so sweet and romantic! I also love the writing but there are a couple nit picks I have. You may not agree and that ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Hey Sally
This is so absolutely adorable! Also being a complete sap for romance I loved it. I wish so much that you get to see her again. It was also very ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Noticed
This is so sweet. And I love that it is cheesy and romantic because that is how love should be. Although there were a couple of errors or pieces that ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Flower Garden
I like the idea that you are going with by being representative but I think this might be a little to representative. I want to understand more of your emotion ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Inevitability
I know completely how this feels; the moment you realize your relationship is going to end. Your righting also holds a lot of emotion and I love how this is ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: A Hundred Years
No words can describe this but I am going to try. This is so unbelievably sweet. It is also really sad but I still love it. It was really a ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Maybe.
This is so sweet and adorable. I love it. And even though it is maybe it gives it possibility and hope. I love they way you describe things to "glittering ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Our love was black and white
This is such a cute poem. Like absolutely adorable. I really like how you pick a theme- piano- and stuck with it the whole time. It really tied in the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Sipping Orange Juice
I love this poem. It rhymes which makes it fun. You also included the beginning in the end which is really good and fun. I also like that it doesn't ...
Jun 29, 2014
