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RoxieRain

RoxieRain

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Black Fire - Prologue

    Hey Confused Glasses, I loved your writing. I find it is similar to what I have read and how I write, which I like a lot. Even though what you ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hi. Have we met?

    Hey Wolfare1, Great poem! I love the way you included the parenthesis. It adds another level of insight into the person this is about. I feel like many can relate ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Snowball

    Wow I really like this. At first I was just thinking in my head you shouldn't live life thinking 'If I never' type of thing. But the ending completely changed ...

    Jul 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: The Things I Do (Section 3)

    Sorry for reviewing so much all of the sudden but I really just had to read all of these and now I can't wait to read more. Like I said ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: The Things I Do (Section 2)

    On to the second, haha. Anyways this one was just as good and still left me wanting to read more. The only thing I would suggest is going through and ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: The Things I Do

    Oh my gosh I love this! :-) But to backtrack first I saw that you had done a review on one of my pieces and I like to return the ...

    Jul 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Stole Your Words

    I love this poem it is so sweet and romantic! I also love the writing but there are a couple nit picks I have. You may not agree and that ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Hey Sally

    This is so absolutely adorable! Also being a complete sap for romance I loved it. I wish so much that you get to see her again. It was also very ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Noticed

    This is so sweet. And I love that it is cheesy and romantic because that is how love should be. Although there were a couple of errors or pieces that ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Flower Garden

    I like the idea that you are going with by being representative but I think this might be a little to representative. I want to understand more of your emotion ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Inevitability

    I know completely how this feels; the moment you realize your relationship is going to end. Your righting also holds a lot of emotion and I love how this is ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Hundred Years

    No words can describe this but I am going to try. This is so unbelievably sweet. It is also really sad but I still love it. It was really a ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Maybe.

    This is so sweet and adorable. I love it. And even though it is maybe it gives it possibility and hope. I love they way you describe things to "glittering ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our love was black and white

    This is such a cute poem. Like absolutely adorable. I really like how you pick a theme- piano- and stuck with it the whole time. It really tied in the ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Sipping Orange Juice

    I love this poem. It rhymes which makes it fun. You also included the beginning in the end which is really good and fun. I also like that it doesn't ...

    Jun 29, 2014


I exist as I am, that is enough
— Walt Whitman