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Re: It Was the Season of Light
Hey, Rosewood here! 🌹 I've got time for a quick review, so I'll do my best to cut to the chase and be as helpful as possible! Firstly, I'm not ...
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: Sierra and Will
Hey, Rosewood here! 🌹 I'm a bit late to review, but for some reason, this short story really resonated with me, and I just had to give you my own ...
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: Hands of Death - Part One: The Note
Hey, Rosewood here! 🌹 My first impressions... I love this! The life you brought to these characters felt surreal, in the sense that I could easily visualize and understand their ...
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: [To a Main Character]
Hey, Rosewood here! 🌹 It's been a few months since I've reviewed, so sorry if it's not the most helpful. Anyway, let's get started! First of all, I just want ...
Jun 30, 2021 -
Re: On Thin Ice
Hey there @Lunargirl, I'm her to give you a (hopefully) helpful review! Minor Corrections "Margaret, where are you going?" my younger sister Mary asks, looking up at me with her ...
Oct 28, 2020 -
Re: The Scarlet Demon
Hey @Horisun, I saw you didn't get a review, so I'm here to aid that! Minor Corrections His eyes are as dark as the coal he uses to try and ...
Oct 27, 2020 -
Re: Adventurer, Warrior, Girl
Well, I am back! This was a lovely story; simple but effective. In order of appearance, I only have but one small correction. Minor Corrections She would slip through the ...
Oct 17, 2020 -
Re: Ghost Bro
Hey there @0blank0! I enjoyed this simple, but effective, horror story and I'm here to help you make it even better. Minor Corrections (In order of appearance) My brother and ...
Oct 15, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Sunrise and Snowfall (pt.2)
I'm finally here, sorry for the delay as mentioned. I saw that you weren't sure that, as one of your usual reviewers in this story, I wanted to continue with ...
Oct 12, 2020 -
Re: Destiny
This was wonderful, and it reminds me of something I did in fifth grade, (excluding the part where it wasn't great). I'm not exactly an expert at poetry, but I'll ...
Sep 30, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 2
Much better! This will be a short review because I just couldn't find anything too wrong or in need of correction. The majority will probably just be me lending a ...
Sep 30, 2020 -
Re: A Well Meaning Sacrifice
Hey there, this was a nice tale, but I got the idea it was only a fragment. Even if you don't choose to continue it, I think this was a ...
Sep 30, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1
I see you've been busy! I'm back to review you fabulous work, so let's jump right in, (pardon the pun). She swam up, shocked by the sudden cold, and eventually ...
Sep 29, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Sunrise and Snowfall (pt.1)
Whew, I'm back to review your book! (And today, by the way, I could hardly find a thing!) There was Emile and Oliva Burnett, who had met each other, fell ...
Sep 27, 2020 -
Re: Red Hair, Blue Eyes
This was certainly something! While the plot and story itself was good, I felt there were many grammatical errors and near run-ons. Shall we begin? It was late and everyone ...
Sep 27, 2020
