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Re: Playing with faults
Hello! First off, I disagree with the previous reviewer: It is totally fine to not capitalize every line. It's 100% up to the poet what they want to do with ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: I Have Learned to Hate the Dark
Hello! I'm here to fulfill that WRFF request you made ^^ So today I learned that respite is yet another word that is pronounced differently in the UK and places ...
May 16, 2016 -
Re: An Arrival Later Unwelcomed
Heyyyy So you asked for a review on this way back in September, and I sorta completely forgot about it till now sooo here I am. Okay, so I think ...
May 16, 2016 -
Re: Mon Dernier Amour
Hello! You asked for a review on this way back in Feburary, so here I am finally! So I think this poem works well with the rhyme. Your rhymes were ...
Apr 21, 2016 -
Re: In Memory
Heeey You asked for a review on this way back in February, and I'm only getting around to it now. Sorry! I hope you can still use a review on ...
Apr 21, 2016 -
Re: Seafoamy
Hello! You asked for a review on this back in January, so here I finally am! I like the images here, and how you focused around a color. That was ...
Apr 21, 2016 -
Re: Passé
Okay, so way back in January, you asked me to review this. I'm finally here. I hope you still want this review! Okay. So I think one major thing that's ...
Apr 21, 2016 -
Re: petrichor//a timeline in no particular order
Ugh pomp this was so beautiful and raw and uuugghhh why are you not making millions already Okay. So this is an experiment, and I think it succeeded quite well. ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: Spiraling Down
Hello! You asked for a rip, so a rip you shall get. Don't feed the flames if you can't stand the fire. Okay, so the forced rhyme in this is ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Never Enough (Knowledge) To Go Around
Hiya! This is pretty good. I especially like the ending with the gap. That hit pretty hard and was really effective. There are some things I'm not as fond of ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: [ctrl] + [a] --> [del]
Hello Noni! Long time, no see! So I really like this poem. Its tone and mood are so deliciously hopeless, and you have some really nice images and word choices. ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: (2-Part Poem: I. In All Likeliness II. In A Movie)
Hello! Great poems! Okay. In All Likeness: So it strikes me as odd that the narrator knows some specific things about the people (like that the man is waiting for ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Everything Turned Out Good In a Logical Way!
hello! So this isn't very logical, but maybe that's the point? One thing that's bothering me about this is the complete lack of a rhyme pattern. I think you can ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: A poem: Grief
Hello! I'm sorry for your loss, first off. So the concept of this poem was pretty cool, and for once, I didn't hate all of the rhymes. I do think ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Positive Passions
Hello! Okay, so I'll tell you straight-up: I'm not very fond of this poem. If you can't take criticism, I suggest that you don't continue reading this. Okay, so I ...
Dec 30, 2015