Rook

Hey! I like this poem and what it stands for. I can tell this is a very personal, rather narrative poem. I think that this situation (pretty much just classic ...

Hey! This is a really good poem! I love science poetry and narrative poetry and this combines the best with the best! Really fantastic job, I must say. Honestly, I ...

Hello! I appreciate that you're doing poetry exercises. That's always fun! Excuse me if I don't read these all word for word. I'm not sure there's really a purpose. I ...

Hello! so first of all, I definitely don't think these all should have been posted in the same work. It's kinda like cheating the reviewers out of three extra reviews. ...

Hello! I really feel like "oblivious" is not the right word. Like, I'm not sure exactly what you were getting at, but I feel like you might've been trying to ...

Hello! So I appreciate the sentiments in this poem. I think it's a feeling that pervades the country, and honestly the world (this sort of stuff isn't just in America, ...

Hello! Here to free this from the clutches of the green room! Okay, usually I don't like rhymed poems because their rhymes are really forced. Your poem has some forced ...

Fun fact! You're the last poem in the green room right now! And that's pretty cool, seeing as this was written in July! But I'm here to kick you out. ...

Hello! First off: take everything I say with a grain of salt. Okay, so I've read a lot of suicide poems on this site, and this one surprised me a ...

Achingly beautiful poem, as always, Pomp. this one is particularly beautiful. There's just so much in it. So many images and sensory details. It might be a little bit of ...

Hello Holy! Lovely poem you have here. It is so like a dream. So lovely and liquid and floaty. There are a bunch of really awesome things going on here. ...

Hey! This started out as a comment but then I had too much to say. I really liked this, the emotion behind it, the subject matter, the pacing... pretty much ...

Hello! Pretty nice ekphrasis! Okay, so you have some really nice things going on here. The imagery is really nice, and it really describes the painting. You have nice tone ...

Hey Strange M'Tange, here to boot this outta the green room. I really enjoyed this poem. I will admit that I read Morrigan's review waaay before deciding to review this ...

Hello Pomp! I'm here to save this from the dark recesses of the green room. Huzzah! You have all your beautiful concrete images and flow and pacing and beauty like ...