Rook

Hello! This is a really beautiful poem. Your images work so well, and the flow is so nice! I probably won't have anything extremely helpful to say, but I do ...

Hi Pomp! Wish I could give this a second "like" because I reread it and wanted to like it but then I realized I already had. Beautiful poem. I love ...

Hello! Okay, so as this is a literary work, it needs reviewing. Hopefully I can give some sort of insight on how to improve this, despite its shortness. So, the ...

Wow. This is the way I wish I could write poems. Emotional, raw, meaningful. Morrigan said it made her cry. I might have cried too if I wasn't such a ...

Hey pomp! So! This, as always, has your beautiful vocabulary and images and word choice. I never dislike a poem I read from you just because the words are so ...

hello night! I'm writing this on my phone so pardon any mistakes! This is a beautiful poem. Even moreso because I know the story behind it. But I read the ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! So this is a nice, short, and sweet poem. It's written well, and I like the formatting. I also think that the subject is pretty relatable. ...

hello! This was a really beautiful poem

Hey! okay, so this works as like, something inspirational to tell your friend who's feeling like they can't do anything, but as a poem to be read and enjoyed as ...

Hey! I really like this poem. I've felt this sensation many times while walking around the big city of Chicago, especially at night. I really love how you took this ...

Hello! okay, this poem, I halfway really like and halfway feel "eh" about. I really like all the concrete images that you used to create an emotional landscape. The images ...

Hello! So this is quite a nice poem. I like all of the images of rain and plants. All of the images are really concrete, and that's what makes this ...

hey cog! So these are all little licence plate numbers, hm? So you appear to be making the point that prisoners are the one writing them? That seems a little ...

Hey! I'm going to be ripping up your poem, so take everything I say with a grain of salt. First and absolutely foremost, the title should be "Humanity's Battle." (unless ...

This is a beautiful and simple poem, Reise