Rook

I really like the rhythm and the rhyme. And the subject. I can relate to what you said in this, and I think a lot of poets (who tend to ...

This was really cute! It was written very well and I could definitely feel the emotion in the little things Avirl did. I like their names too. I want to ...

This was a really simple poem, yet it was really powerful. The way you wrote it out put emphasis on all the best words and made you really slow down ...

I really like the last rhyming couplet. It flows really nicely. A couple of your rhymes and rhythms were kind of forced, but You had pretty awesome iambic pentameter. one ...

I just want to say that this doesn't really use iambic pentameter, but I liked the rest of it. I liked the rhyme scheme and the rhymes; I liked the ...

This was really really cool. you had me from the first stanza, and I simply adored the mood you set. It was so mysterious and thought provoking. I mean, I ...

This is a pretty accurate description of how it feels when I read. good job. I really like the part with the television and how your house is drowning when ...

I didn't think it was too cliche. Parts of it were, you just have to find those parts and fix them, but sometimes cliche is good. it gives people a ...

Creeeeeepyyyyyyy. This sounded exactly like the raven from Edgar Allan Poe. The rhyme scheme rhythm and word choice matched his very well, and I was reminded of it from the ...

I agree that this is clever. And I've written a few notes like this in my life. This is better than all mine. Isn't poetry such a great way to ...

I really like the symbolism. I've never thought of flowers and friends that way. It's a really easy to read poem, and the ending is the perfect ending with "friendships ...