Rook

Hello! First some quick little nitpick things! "too incredible in a sk_" I haven't heard the phrase "a sky" a lot. Seems more fitting to be "the sky" unless, of ...

Hello! ok, critique #1. Please reduce the font size. I had to zoom out to read this poem in any comprehensible way. I don't really see why you need it ...

Hello! That last line was excellent. The little poetic turn there, really nice stuff. I must say I feel like I don't quite understand this poem the way it's meant ...

Hello! Ok, so I got to the fourth line and then I went, "what? why is this so awkward right here?" I hadn't even realized you were rhyming until then. ...

Hello! This is quite a curious poem! I'm so interested in who it's addressed to. Just an ancient one, is all I get. I think the tone here is really ...

Hello! I really like the tone of this piece. It's so nostalgic and just a little resentful. That's how I read it, anyway. It starts with a very strong image ...

Hello! I thought this was an interesting concept for a poem. I haven't read many poems that degrade lions haha My Number One piece of advice for you: delete. You ...

Hello! This is a pretty poem! I think I might be missing something emotionally, because I'm left at the end wondering... why. Just why in general. Why I read this, ...

Ooh look! a Holy Poem! :D So! Let's take this stanza by stanza. First off, you title is lovely. Good job there. Sometimes titling can be the hardest thing. First ...

Hello! This is a beautiful poem with such rich, delicious imagery. I think it's kinda perfect already, but I'll try to help in some way. Honestly, I wouldn't take my ...

Hello! I don't think this is bad at all for what you're going for. I am no expert in this sort of poetry, but it looks pretty good (again, FOR ...

Hello! I feel like you have a cool premise. I like the line "If only she loved me," with one celestial body yearning for another. However, your poem has a ...

Hi Lums! It's been a while since i reviewed you (or just in general), so hopefully I still know how to give some sort of of feedback. I googled your ...

Hello! I'm going to try to be as honest as I can in this. This is by no means meant to be harmful, so take everything I say with a ...

Hello! I'm sorry for the loss of your cat :( This is pretty good, especially for what it is (poems directed toward beloved pets and such do not really need ...