Oh yes, oh yes.
A Crusader prayer? Right up my alley. The Crusades are my favorite time period in all of history, and I have devoted myself these past few years to researching all of the events as deep as I can.
Does your prayer put a smile on my face? Yes.
This has to be my favorite line of the poem,
"Blood and sand, blue skies above, a tarnished flag."
For some reason even this tiny snippet of description is enough for my to imagine a great battle upon the sands of the Holy Land, and this knight's comrades who died there.
"We, God's holy men, with fearless hearts,
we march upon Jerusalem."
I love this too. Jerusalem was always the ultimate goal of all the Crusades, whether it was capturing it, defending it, or recapturing it. Many knights and pilgrims alike cried when they reached the city, after having traveled so long to get there.
"for we are men of Christ,
and for Him we fall."
Indeed almost everyone on crusade would gladly have died for their Lord, which is why they were such a terrifying and effective army, leading them to capture all of the coastline of the Levant. Since their time, never has a military force been filled with such religious zeal.
Latin? Yes oh yes.
Even though no knight would have known the Latin language, or been able to read or write at all, I'm sure many memorized prayers from the monks and priests they traveled with on the long roads.
I've included Latin in my crusader stories as well, and it really is a beautiful touch.
This is perfectly accurate and all except for the last two words.
"Deus Vult."
God wills it, as it translates to, was only used as a rally note or a battle cry, and only in and around the First Crusade around 1100 AD. So it would not have been used at the end of a prayer like this one. It was meant to be screamed with your fellow knights before a charge against the Saracens, and not in prayers and holy dealings.
Nevertheless, this is a great poem you've got here.
10/10
Outstanding job.
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