Rook

Hello! I really like how this ended. So with “making” and “headlights” you showed that you weren’t capitalizing every line… but then you went ahead and capitalized every line. Pick ...

Hello. Please take this with a grain of salt, and do not be offended, I’m just trying to give you an honest critique. So I think I am confused at ...

Hello! I think the main problem with this is its rhyme. This has potential to use rhyme to its advantage (several poems with rhyme simply do not need rhyme, but ...

Hi Audy

Hello! I appreciate the sentiments in this poem. I think we’re all busy a lot. As it is, it reminds me a lot of Dr. Seuss, and if that’s what ...

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Hello! I appreciate the sentiments in this poem. I think we’re all busy a lot. As it is, it reminds me a lot of Dr. Seuss, and if that’s what ...

Hiya Pomp! This poem seems a lot skinnier than usual ;) Have you been feeding it well? The tone in this poem is fabulous. It’s so calm yet so sad, ...

Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you, Cuil Theory 2, on the rocks, with a twist! This was amazing. I loved reading the other Cuil theory, and I'm glad someone ...

Wow that was a lot of comments in a short amount of time... but only one review!? (someone will probably review this before I do making that statement invalid but ...

Hey! I reviewed your last really short poem, so I figure, why not review this one too? I find it interesting that you've got two of these two-line poems (and ...

Hello. very interesting concept. o.o I would've never thought to write a poem about this. So, I'm super glad that you explained what this was about, because I would have ...

HI TIMMY So let's jump in. cacophany *eyetwitch* My dear, it's cacophony. This, however is different from the some time and some where that you have, which I like, personally. ...

Mags goes to all these parties and likes to rub in her socialness by writing poetry about it. Just kidding. So I read this before and really liked it, but ...

Hello! I really like blackout poetry. But I think what I like most about it is actually seeing the parts that were blacked out and what was left. It kind ...

Hello! I thought this little musing was interesting. I like how you titled it under "horror" as it has the smell of a horror of realization. As this is very ...