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Hai K~ So, we have a poem here. The title really drew me in. I've always thought Eskimo kisses were adorable. I'll take this stanza by stanza The first line ...

Hey Hatt! This poem made me smile a bit. I definitely wasn't expecting that ending. You started off strong with images, and continued with that. I think "to tears" is ...

Hello! I like the concept of this poem ^^ Know that all of these are just suggestions and you don't have to listen to any of them. One thing I ...

Hello! This was an interesting poem. First of all, I am confused at the period/exclamation point mix in your title. I think something there should be fixed. I am also ...

Hello again! I don't know the poem that you based this off of, so I'll review it like its own self. "Parents" is capitalized and it shouldn't be. The first ...

Hello! I thought this was a really interesting way of writing a poem. It was pretty solid, but I'll try to help you improve it as much as I can. ...

Hello blablabl92! I was about to yell at you for rhyming, but I kind of like the sing-songiness to this, so the rhyming might be alright. I'm usually not a ...

Hello! First of all, italics are used mostly for emphasis, so italicizing a whole poem isn't really doing much, and kinda hurts my eyes. I like how this is kind ...

Hello! Your title was very deep... and then the poem. Caption unrelated, huh? Honestly, I really like your title and wish I could see something with this title that actually ...

Hello! Congrats on graduating and feeling better. I'm glad you're feeling good. Now as this is a very personal poem about a very personal thing, I'll try not to hurt ...

Hello! So... interesting images you have here. I can't tell what they all lead up to though? Why is the valley glazed pink? Does that represent something? What is the ...

Hiya! I like the voice in this poem. It's really strong, and that makes the poem unique. What initially drew me into the poem was the title. It's also very ...

Hello! I like the poem that inspired you a lot! One of the first things I noticed were the dashes. Dashes everywhere. Now don't get me wrong, I love me ...

Hmmm I am curious what "seminole" you're referring to, because I can't seem to find a tree type with that name. This is a very short poem, and while I ...

Hello! This poem had a kind of funny wistful, lovey-dovey feel to it. I say it suited its purposes fairly well. I like your mention in of Body slamming in ...