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Hello! This was quite grim. One thing that I feel you really didn't need was the rhyme. I feel like rhyme should be used for children's books, songs, and those ...

Hello! So the obvious thing right here are these "huh..."s over to the right. I don't like them. I don't see their purpose. The only thing I can imagine they ...

Hiya pomp! These were some pretty great lyrics. I could also hear a little song playing in my head, so that means that the rhythm is good enough for me ...

Hello! This was a very interesting poem. I don't get the chance to read poems written in this style very often. This was very narrative. It told quite a story, ...

hi. usually I don't like rhymes in poetry, but here I guess I'm okay with it. It's a bit forced, but the content reminds me of those songs that are ...

I figured since I'm having cramps I may as well review something that alludes to uteri. Also if this review is nastier than usual, please forgive my ravings. Wow. Such ...

So after reviewing several other things, I have come back to this to give you a proper review. So, I really did think the perspective of this was intriguing. I ...

Hi Wanderlust! I like your username! So, the review I'm about to give you is probably going to be harsh. Know that it's not you that I'm reviewing, it's not ...

This poem is too deep. I don't understand. :( Too deep. Yes... Perhaps that's the description of all your poems... >.> You use "street" twice in the first stanza and ...

Hiya! So I was not expecting this to be about Avatar, but here we are. Hey that rhymed! Which brings me to my next point. The rhyming in this poem ...

Hello chaser! Here from Phee Phi Pho Phum to review! This was quite an interesting poem. I really like the concept you laid out here of turning away and letting ...

Hey there. "be me" ew no I don't want to be someone who hasn't had a shower in two weeks no thanks. So this poem kinda devolved into... shrieking? It ...

Cog I miss you, but your poem needs to be reviewed. This is actually pretty good. Better than what I usually expect from you, no offence. I like the world ...

Wow, this was really, really good. Like, I'm floored here. Fantastic. I usually am not that vehement with my praise either. The way this flowed was perfect. It ran through ...

Hi Nugen! I actually really like this poem. It presented something I hadn't thought about before, and that's something I find really important in poetry. The simplicity was divine. I ...