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Hiya! I think this is a poem that most people can relate to. The push and pull between wanting to sleep and wanting to use the hours of the night ...

Hello! This was an interesting chapter to come in on! I always think it's fascinating to read about the fictional sports people come up with and their rules. I like ...

Hello! This is a really intriguing world you've built here. I haven't read the other chapters, but I like the concept I'm seeing of magical girls who get together in ...

Hello! I'll answer your questions since I think by answering them, I'll be able to touch on everything I wanted to say anyway! 1. I always love towns that have ...

Hi Willard! Your poetry is always super surreal and full of memorable images. You have a great way of turning phrases that sticks in your head and to your teeth. ...

Hello! I think there is something very strong at the core of this poem. It's clearest at the very end. The phrase "in hate of his weak hands falling upon ...

Hello! This was a really interesting poem. I really like the consistency of the water imagery throughout, like a river tying everything together. I also liked the consistent form that ...

Hello! I think these are some very nice haiku. I like how all of them can be pondered on for a while. The first one contrasting the oldness of the ...

Hello! I really enjoy sestinas. They're so difficult yet satisfying to write. This was a cool poem in that it felt like reading a dramatic part of a novel. Like, ...

Hello! I really enjoyed the visual of this poem, as if there are steps descending into the sea. This seems to be a poem perhaps about a painful or maybe ...

Hello! I think this poem had a really good message! You're absolutely right, tears are not a sign of weakness but a sign of emotional depth. Not to say those ...

Hello! This is a very unique poem! I like experimental stuff like this, and I think you have some really strong imagery to ground the poem in. It was a ...

Hello! This was a lovely poem. It really evoked in me a desire to be in this place, to hear little bells jingling, to feel the morning mist on my ...

Hello! Apologies for typos: I'm typing on my phone! I have a very soft spot for science-centric poetry. I tend to lean more towards biology, but I've written and read ...

Hello! Please forgive any typos, I'm typing this on my phone and don't have any spell check type deal. I've known several people with emetophobia, at least one with it ...