RishabhParmar

Hi, I loved this poem. It is clear that you have a very clear vision. I loved this poem because you did a fine starting. It is so nice to ...

Hi, Pure thoughts. I don't lie. It is awesome. I sensed the feeling of love. "She calls me selfish" It is a nice ending. There is no better ending than ...

Hi, Nicely done. I loved the way you crafted it. Hope to see some more work like this. I sensed the starvation for future in this poetry. It is nice. ...

Hi, Nicely done. Each stanza is in its place. Nothing is inappropriate. I loved this kind of work. Where poet knows what to write, where to write....I, myself learn a ...

Hi, It is a good work mate. I liked it. Especially the thought you put in. I don't want guess, I am sure You felt it really well while writing ...

HI, Nice poem. Words are less for such a good balladry. For this feeling, you need to add more words. Feelings are enough just add some vocab. "Will you assure ...

Hi, Finally I got the piece which I loved reading. I loved the starting. I don't know why anyone didn't review it. I am the first reviewer. So title is ...

HI, I don't know what do you mean by "fucking cowgirl"? This F word depicts bad stuff. Make it clear about the usage of words. If you use dirty slangs ...

Hey, I read your note. It is a good poem mate. Don't worry we all learn from the flaws. Your poem is flawless, I loved it from the beginning. The ...

Wow, I love reviewing because of work you all bring in YWS. Wow, Nice work. I sensed every emotions of jenny. I considered my self jenny. "I am jenny. It ...

Hi, It is a very monstrous story. But It fits in short story section. Because I love unabridged short stories. You are a great story teller. I love when a ...

Hey, wow.... I appreciate you picked up this topic. Such news always remain ghost stories in eastern countries. NO body take interest what is happening in the world. I am ...

HI, Wow, I loved this chapter. While reading i was thinking about Thor and hobbit. Nice story, I love to see converting it into a good novel. Starting of this ...

Hi, It is an elegant short love story of a boy. I loved the character, everything is in its place. Each character has some taste. It is a short story ...

Hi, When i first behold your poem, I thought it is a paragraph. But after reading this piece I felt that I read a poetry. You have done such a ...