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RishabhParmar

  • Poetry » Romantic, Health Re: crushing beneath the weight

    Hi, Good job. You did an excellent work. It is a good poem with lots of feelings. You worked on details. In the first stanza, it is clear how imaginative ...

    Jul 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: floral ballerinas

    Hi, NIce micro poem. Length is no barrier in poetry. Barrier is feelings. But you crossed that barrier and wrote good, teeny-weeny poem. I loved it. The imagination is good. ...

    Jul 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: cRAP

    Hi, I am still laughing. Nice humoristic poem. I loved the starting of the poem. The way you took it high. The length of the poem is good. Although length ...

    Jul 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Half of the World Away Isn't Far Enough to Stop You

    Hi, It is such a nice piece of work. You poem is short but full of words enough to feel the balladry. I loved it. I sensed each and every ...

    Jul 5, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Blank Beginnings

    HI, Nice poetry. Nice vision. A great poem. I chose poem of my choice and I know I chose a good poem. When I read it I felt every line, ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    hi, It will be my longest review I have ever written. So buckle up. I loved this piece a lot. So I am now going to tell you few nice ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Immortal Tear

    HI, It is short story and well-formed story. Only one thing I don't like is it is short. It had to be a bit long. I was enjoying the story ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Biggest Fear

    Hi, Nice poem. You are a good poet. It is a macro poetry. The more I read it the more i liked to read it. I am a poetry reader ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Silent Advice

    Hi, nice poem. Great start. I tell you. You are a good thinker. The way you wrote this poem is amazing. Your creativity shows us all, the more you work ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Forgive Me

    Hi, Nicely done. I know it is a piece written directly from your heart. I appreciate the feeling. Great work mate. Words speak better, when you feel them. you thoughts ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: .

    Wow, I loved it. Very inspirational. The starting is good. "You are more than a name" It explains everything. I love such kind of inspirational poems. You did a good ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Historical Fiction Re: Maycomb

    Hi, it is a micro poetry. NOt micro, it is a nano poetry. But i loved three lines. It makes one para but some times three lines give you a ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Technology, Satire Re: Living Room

    Hi, It is my kind of poem. I love it. Full of vocabulary. A good starting is a must, but you started it very well. The first line of this ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: bleu / azul / blu

    Hi, Nice poem. It is not rusty. It is good. Nice choice of words. Feeling is great. The starting is better. I felt it in my core. The first line ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a diagram explaining my body to you

    Hi, Love to read such a nice poetry. I suggest you not use fonts. But the meaning of this poem is hunk-dory. I loved the idea. I loved the concept. ...

    Jun 27, 2017


A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
— Roald Dahl