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Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 13: [Insert Epic Chapter Title Here That Will Perfectly Describe What is About to Happen]
Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back to review some more! This was another great chapter! I think you made up having the last chapter so short because this one was longer :) ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 12: Pathetically, No Savior.... Maybe
Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back for more! This was a really short chapter! Again-you left me with nothing to correct! You are making my job harder! I have a few questions ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 11: Capture the Flag of Over-Exaggerated Doom
Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 has returned once again! :D Great chapter! I love the details, the thought, and how well this chapter went! I again saw no corrections to be made-(You ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 10: Let's NOT Get Caught
Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back for my last review for today-but I will continue soon! I loved this chapter! The action, the team effort, and the smart hiding place! Will the ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 9: Bethany (Duh-Duh-Duuuuuhhhhh!!!!)
Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 here again to review! This was a great chapter-but you did not explain why they got glared at in the last chapter when they got into the ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: Tips For Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 8: In Which We All Get Dirty Looks
Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back again to review your story! (sorry I took a few days off) This chapter was great! I loved all of the detail! You and it in ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: Tips For Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 7: A Different Way of Saying Things
Hello again HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back again to review! I again did not see much to fix! Here is what I did see: Rowan nodded. “And mine third.” I am not ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 6: Please Don't Kill Me, Rowan!
Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back again to review! *I am halfway through!* :elephant: Okay! I really liked this chapter. It really eased the scary cat girl and showed that she could ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: Tips For Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 5: Forget me! Is Rowan Ok?
Hello again HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back once again to review! (Hope you are not getting sick of me! :P ) Okay! This chapter was actually fairly short! There really was not ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: Tips For Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 4: The Lake, as it Turns Out, is NOT Made of Actual Citric Acid
Hey HolgraphicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back again with a review! *I am aiming to review all of your chapters!* I really enjoyed this chapter! I love how you perfectly put each chapter ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep Book 1 Chapter 1
Hey jessiebear! CHRISSY321 here with a review as promised! :D As I was reading your story-I was often confused with quiet a few errors, but I really think that this ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: The World's Most Unlikely Romance
Hey Dracula! HRISSY here with a short review! I just loved this! I think that you rocked this new style of writing! It seems like it would be very hard ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 3: Why Am I Not Feeling Ok?
Hello again HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 here again to review chapter 3! I think you did really well this chapter! You explained why Molly was dreading the car ride, and further showed ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 2: What Kind of a Camp Name is that?
Hello again HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 back to review your next chapter! I again enjoyed this chapter as well as I did with the last. :) I like how you are able ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 1: Did My Teacher Just Call us Turds?
Hello HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 here with a quick review! I am excited to continue reading the other chapters you have just posted! I think that this is going to be good ...
Jan 24, 2016