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I really liked this, and how you keep it simple and humorous. It really relates to those of us that have a "boy who sits in front of us in ...

Oh I do quite like this. At first it reminded me of Star Wars (my version of a massive compliment) with the space/starship and the pods and almost Tatooine-reminiscent planet, ...

The lyrics were good, and the descriptions were present but also a little vague. That might have been what you were going for though. But the great thing is I ...

Oh I so agree and love this! It's so great! The first line and it's nonsense words hooked me in quite like Lewis Carrol- and I mean this every way ...

I think I agree with what Sassykat said earlier. I like it, the descriptions are good. But I don't connect with it like a poem usually does with the reader. ...

I don't have much to say other than this is an amazing poem with more conviction than I thought it would originally. The usage of J.R.R Tolkien's quote was just ...

This was really... really... really good. :D I only have one complaint, and that is of 'the other dude'. I think that other terminology would convey the feelings that the ...

First of all, I am very very sorry about your friend. :( Secondly, you transformed your grief and sadness into a literary work of art. The raw emotion and turmoil ...

This was a beautiful poem, and I'm very sorry about what happened. :( The way you word it trully shows the way you're feeling and I can give no tips ...

This was really good, I like it alot. :) It had a great and unconventional prose that captured me well! It showed the love but without being all lovey-dovey and ...

Holy poetry prodigy. Although I didn't quite grasp the meaning I still loved it. The emotion was deep and striking and it grasped my right off the bat. The last ...

it seemed like a nice start, but a little bit general. I only have one editing tip- about your pay I have it her. The 'her' should be 'here' but ...

I liked the idea, of vampires not being the cutesy sparkly ones in pop culture, but I think the flow of the poem in general was too choppy. I'm not ...

Wow! I really liked this! :D The sentence fluency really worked out well, and it was well written. As an uber-fan of Greek mythology I think you captured the idea ...

xD I really liked this. The mood was set immediately and carried on throughout the piece. The moment I started reading I somehow knew it would end something like the ...