Renard

Hey. XD I liked this. :D I think the interactions are good between the characters. And I really like the way you open with a contrast, about ending said glamourous ...

Hey. I have never seen anything like this before. Your opening line is actually quite aggressive. When I started reading, I noticed the formatting and the language were not standard ...

Me again! XD This is certainly not what i expected. 'I wake up to someting' - this line comes across as very mysterious. 'That scared the living out of me.' ...

Hey XD I love the fact you open with a rhetorical question. More than that, I love the topic you are tackling in this work. 'I cried during Up..' this ...

Hey. I love the fact that this is a follow on from another work. 'One book might say something, But it doesn't mean the truth is told.' I love this ...

Hey Baby. XD Each time I read a new chapter of this work I get more and more excited your character [Robert] is developing rapidly and you're doing something really ...

Hey! So this work was shorter than I was expecting. XD Still... a good read. Ok... Having Loneliness as a sole word on the first line was a good idea. ...

I love the alliteration in the title. It's very pretty. 'While twilit clouds reflect the tress, glowing clementine The world so awash in fine metals and fire' I have chosen ...

Hello! You have presented a very clear argument here, and your work screams deeply of thoughtful, intellectual processes. I am very impressed by the way you have structured and composed ...

Heggo! XD Of all the words in the English to open your chapter with, you chose: "TITS" :D Which strangely, is the perfect choice for this style of work. I ...

Hey! Thanks for the link. So here we go. :) '“Well?! Spit it out! What are you doing ‘ere?!”' The colloquialisms still work really well here and it adds character ...

Heggo! XD I thought I would review this piece... Not what I was expecting!!!!! 'Carbohydrates give you energy to live, But if overconsumed illness it can give.' - I love ...

Hmmm. I cannot tell whether or not this piece stems from your personal experience or not. It would be more obvious if it were less conversational: 'Agh, I'm bored.' - ...

Intriguing title. :) There is a lovely tone of humour to this work: '"Your handwriting is rather atrocious," she commented as she finished.' For some reason, I find the concept ...

Willa is a very pretty name. :) The way you write is incredibly simplistic: 'Willa looked up to see Fae stab the boy through the heart. He fell down next ...