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Hey there. I really liked this poem, enjoyed it a lot. Your title was vague (in a good way) so it made the readers wonder what it could be, and ...

Heyy there. I enjoyed this a lot. Mostly because I've been through the same, so it was relatable. Well framed and well written. I liked how you simply used plain ...

Heyyyy there. Okay so, I'd like it more if you'd use capitals at the beginning of every line and space out your stanzas effectively. Look, Don't make your lines to ...

Hey there, I liked the way you've framed this poem, but isn't it more of a song? I don't know why but it's missing the poetic stuff. Anways. " Her ...

Well well. I enjoyed this, but it somehow lost the element which compels readers to read further. You should use capitals at the beginning of every line and use commas ...

Okay I need you to understand that you don't have to rush. I'm saying this because it seemed rushed up. Even if you weren't doing so. Good use of words. ...

Ooh painful!! :p Really this is short and to the point, I would've loved it if you hadn't rushed through :( But maybe you like it this way, so *claps* ...

Okay, this was well versed and well framed. I enjoyed it. You could've made use of commas and merged some lines, or maybe extend them. They were choppy, a mistake ...

Okay so, this was a great one. Really, a topic people won't usually pick. It's actually a good way to express something so simple. I think you should use capitals ...

Hey there! It's a great start to writing interesting stuff. So here, my suggestions flow out. The prologue, its like the movie Legion. There are many movies based on apocalypses ...

Hey, I'm here for a reviewwwww. Okay so, it was totally AMAZING. I loved it!! The way you framed the whole scenario was awesome. And the concept of him coming ...

It was pretty expressive and gave a good background on what the story might be (as suggested in your description) Intriguing and well framed. "All of this was observed by ...

I loved the flow. Brilliant poetry. I wish you'd used different and expressive lines at the end and beginning. But the end came as quite a shock, I didn't understand ...

I really liked how you've made use of the words, I still think you could work on a few things. There has to be a flow to poems, it was ...

I liked it a lot. Well framed. Brownies. You need to use some commas, like "God loves everyone, poor or rich." "Yet in reality, you don't really need the stuff." ...