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Heyy. Okay, I loved this!! :D The first and last stanzas were the best, had to be, beginning and ending yay. Insomnia is a condition where you can't sleep well, ...

Hey there. Lemme start with stuff I did not quite approve of. " She still held close the hope that something would come one day." I think this sounds better, ...

Heyya. First off, great poem. I liked the imagery here and the description goes well. Honestly, your composition is quite different and I love that. I loved the speech sentences ...

Hey there. Do you know what this was? PERFECT. No flaws. I liked the way you described Stellan's emotions, just like a kid's and how, at the same time, he ...

Heyyyya. Was it rushed up? Well maybe it's just your style. Anyways, great description, just add some more imagery to it. I connect with the composition, so I understand the ...

Hey there. I like the simplicity of this poem, the rhyme scheme also adds to the flow and it's really nice, I'd prefer it to be more expressive though. Lengthen ...

Heyy heyy heyyy. Cool theme, but I somehow felt the title didn't match up to it. I understand what you were trying to do with it, but it couldn't shine ...

Heyyy. Okay so, I like the plot you're trying to create here. I suggest you to add some more content to this, you have the skeleton, but you need more ...

Woah oh oh. Heyya. I loved this! Something we all need to imbibe in ourselves- to love and appreciate the world we live in. You also described how death made ...

Heyyy. Okay, a sonnet has a fixed rhyme scheme and you followed that well. Good job, just somehow, I felt there was a missing element, something that's always there in ...

Hey there. I really enjoyed what you did here. Used simple language but expressed it very well. Often, we don't realize the importance of many people in our life and ...

Yayyy I liked it. Okay so, firstly, you chose a brilliant topic. Secondly, I loved the title. "When the water, cold, pooled up at my feet" You could've used cold ...

Oh hey. I enjoyed this A LOT. Really this was great. It was something like a fear landscape (you'd know if you've read the Divergent series) and I liked this ...

Hey there.. I liked how you described the emotions here, though your realization part was not well expressed. The last one, where the whole thing comes out. But honestly, it ...

Hey there. I liked the story line, and the thought behind this, well written. I suggest you should use capitals and commas effectively, just a suggestion, okay? And even though ...