Razcoon

I know exactly what you mean. These thoughts have run through my head before. It's depressing, at times, when there are such wonderful things that remain unseen by the world. ...

Okay. I appreciate this, because I came on to review bad, depressing, emo, cutting, slit-wrist poems (those are easiest to review, methinks). Now, I happen to like morbid things (Laughing ...

I am currently too busy to review, but I'll say this: The title made me think it was a poem that made it out to sound as though you're actually ...

I stray from the road I’m meant to walk on. My destiny seems so clouded, My life seems to be a con. This entire stanza doesn't flow well, and could ...

I loved this! Found a few mistakes, but I'm sorry to say it won't let me quote you and point them out. Normally in this case I would copy/paste/add quotes/talk ...

Rushing streams wake my subconscious from it's colorful paintings. This stanza doesn't really make sense to me. Memories of why I'm awake again control my movements. I'd suggest adding another ...

I think this is adorable. You're right, it is a little rough, but I'm not in the mood to full-out review. It isn't much to work off, anyway. A few ...

This was fun to read! I like the concept, and the title drew me in. You're a little wordy, though. I also have a leetle problem...right here... Charles Dickens I ...

I'm going to be completely honest here, I clicked when it was in new works, thought "CLICHE LOVE POEM" and left you to the reviewing wolves which have longer attention ...

We critics can have at your poem, you say? Okay. There were a few stanzas I thought would be easier to just rewrite with proper grammar and such. So I ...

Those days when you were here. The world was brisk and, "brisk, and" every season was an accomplice. The paths were invitations , no comma that led to eminence. Trees, ...

Y'know which one I like best? Mine! The first. Even if it wasn't about me I'd still like it the most. It's kind of...awesome. I still like mine five billion ...

As soon as the words "Justin Bieber" burned my eyes out, I should have seen the ending coming. Also, as soon as my lungs were crushed by lack of air ...

Land of the Free? Her name is a lie. Many are bounded by her so-called freedom. An those of us that aren't bail them out. And She oppresses those that ...

I know what can I do 'can I', or 'I can'? Don’t tell me I am no use Becouse i am full of potenial, Because I. Capitalize your 'I's. I ...