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Re: I Want to Fly
hello, That was such a great image. I don't really have a review because all I can say is that it was unique and well written. Good job and keep ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: the fart
Hello there, I have never read any of your other work, so I read your first review and saw that this was suppose to be a childs book(maybe). Whew. That ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Roberto
Hello, This is such a short piece, and hardly anything has happened. It was a nice short scene, but I think we do need more back round just as the ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
I really like this story. I feel as though you have alot of amazing reviews here, and that I would be repeating what most of them said, so this review ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)
Hello, Here as requested :). This is a very inteseting piece, and I liked it alot, but I also think that because it looks like one giant block of words ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)
Hello, Im glad to review this, but I am sorry to say it might not be as helpful as the first one because you have some pretty awesome reviews already, ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
Hello, Here as requested :) which Im so glad you did. It felt as though that I was going to throw up. This sentence is a little hard to read ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Just a Scar
Hello and welcome to YWS! I am happy to be your first reviewer of the day :). I really like the meaning of this; it's such a cool concept, one ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: (E&iC) The Art of Math & Ladybird Eating
I am so sorry it took me so long to get to this review, but I have had some family problems and had to take a step away from the ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Lilac's eyes (chapter nine)
Hello and Welcome Back :) Im glad to be your first reviewer, and I have had read this a few times before, but somewhere in the middle I lost it. ...
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Singing Wind
So forgive us if we are forgetful. Before this story deteriorates, let me introduce myself. My name's Kora. I think this beginning would be better if it was flipped: Before ...
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Why?
Hello and welcome to YWS! Im am happy to say that I am your first reviewer for the day, and I would love to encourage you to review as many ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: My Razor
Hello and Welcome to YWS! I am happy to say Im your first reviewer for today, and I would like to encourage you to review as many other works as ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Difference....Chapter 1....Crying Night
Hello and welcome to YWS! Im happy to be among your first reviewers, and would like to encourage you to review as many works as you can :). now on ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Little Missy
Here as requested! And boy am i glad you asked for a review, or I might have missed out on this little gem. It's quiet unique and very light hearted. ...
Feb 2, 2010
