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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Want to Fly

    hello, That was such a great image. I don't really have a review because all I can say is that it was unique and well written. Good job and keep ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: the fart

    Hello there, I have never read any of your other work, so I read your first review and saw that this was suppose to be a childs book(maybe). Whew. That ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Roberto

    Hello, This is such a short piece, and hardly anything has happened. It was a nice short scene, but I think we do need more back round just as the ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)

    I really like this story. I feel as though you have alot of amazing reviews here, and that I would be repeating what most of them said, so this review ...

    Apr 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue (REVISED)

    Hello, Here as requested :). This is a very inteseting piece, and I liked it alot, but I also think that because it looks like one giant block of words ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)

    Hello, Im glad to review this, but I am sorry to say it might not be as helpful as the first one because you have some pretty awesome reviews already, ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)

    Hello, Here as requested :) which Im so glad you did. It felt as though that I was going to throw up. This sentence is a little hard to read ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Just a Scar

    Hello and welcome to YWS! I am happy to be your first reviewer of the day :). I really like the meaning of this; it's such a cool concept, one ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: (E&iC) The Art of Math & Ladybird Eating

    I am so sorry it took me so long to get to this review, but I have had some family problems and had to take a step away from the ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Lilac's eyes (chapter nine)

    Hello and Welcome Back :) Im glad to be your first reviewer, and I have had read this a few times before, but somewhere in the middle I lost it. ...

    Feb 9, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Singing Wind

    So forgive us if we are forgetful. Before this story deteriorates, let me introduce myself. My name's Kora. I think this beginning would be better if it was flipped: Before ...

    Feb 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why?

    Hello and welcome to YWS! Im am happy to say that I am your first reviewer for the day, and I would love to encourage you to review as many ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Razor

    Hello and Welcome to YWS! I am happy to say Im your first reviewer for today, and I would like to encourage you to review as many other works as ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Difference....Chapter 1....Crying Night

    Hello and welcome to YWS! Im happy to be among your first reviewers, and would like to encourage you to review as many works as you can :). now on ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Little Missy

    Here as requested! And boy am i glad you asked for a review, or I might have missed out on this little gem. It's quiet unique and very light hearted. ...

    Feb 2, 2010


I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.
— Sylvia Plath