Rascalover

Hey! I am so glad you asked me to review this! First off I would love to say this piece is fueled with such nostalgia! I could definitely relate to ...

Hey! So, I am reviewing this for consistency sake, but to be honest, i don't see much wrong with this piece. I think your characters are coming along wonderfully. They ...

Hey! This is very reminiscent of Hansel and Gretel. While reading it I even got hints of The Land Of Stories (if you don't know then book series, please look ...

Hey! I don't know if I've said this yet, but welcome to YWS, and if you ever need anything feel free to ask! I think you have a very relatable ...

Hey! So, first of all thank you so much for requesting a review! You are one talented writer my friend, and hopefully I can give you some tips to become ...

Hey! I don't really have much to say about this piece, which is a good thing. I love the gradual realization of being stuck, and your ability to describe the ...

Hey! First I would like to say welcome to YWS, and if you ever need anything please let me know! I absolutely love the sentence "So from birth till death ...

Hey! You have a few awesome reviews already, but this short piece was quite interesting to me, so I hope you find my review helpful as well. First I want ...

Hey! First, I would like to say welcome to YWS! I have seen some of your reviews, and they are magnificent! I am excited that this is your first poem, ...

Hey! It looks like you have had a few reviews for this, but I really enjoyed it. The only correction I can see needing made is that in the second ...

Hey! So, I don't know how I am going to critic this because I think this is the most amazing, vivid work I've read in a while. I love your ...

Hey! First off, welcome to YWS! I love your writing style, and I think you are super talented! I was able to follow along with the whole poem until the ...

Hey! This is a very interesting short story. It kind of reminded me of Invader Zim that use to be on Nickelodeon. It's a nineties cartoon, if you weren't sure ...

Hey, First of all, this is beautifully written, and I am so impressed! I wish I could create poetry this beautiful! There's just two things I want to ask and ...

Hey! I'm not sure if this is about your personal life, but if it is I am deeply sorry for your loss and I want you to know if you ...