Brainwashing is a misleading term, your mind isn’t clean, not washed or purified, but so befuddled by his lies that it is clouded, broken, dusty from disuse." There should be a semi-colon after term instead of a comma because this is two full complete sentences mashed together. I also really enjoyed this line. it has some great imagery in it!
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