Rarity

Thanks! It's always a work in progress, and your advice is much appreciated!

Thanks! Much appreciated.

Thanks! This means a lot.

Where is it? This is the second time this has happened to me today. Hmmmm......

Wait, what? Where is it?

Hey Jav! So I read the piece over and I definetly agree with Starleene 100%. She has writen a solid review. It's a good idea, but you need to work ...

This is very nice. It is different from the usual love letter from a soldier. You are able to make this one unique. Instead of this being a sappy love ...

First of all, I love your use of imagery, and your wording. I think that you could make a great story out of this. Keep in mind how you word ...

I'm sensing the begginning of a story! You've got a great start to your plot. There are many different directions that you could go with this. Think about going outside ...

Wow. Well dove, where do I begin? The story is great. You didn't give out a whole lot of background information, and that really adds to the suspense of the ...

Hello, dove! This was really good. One thing that really struck me towards the end was how you portatrayed the idea of 'you don't know what you have until it's ...

Thanks for what you said. I will work on the flow of the stanzas for sure! Rarity%u2666

Really good! I'm a big fan of steampunk. Keep it up!!! Rarity

Ha! I love this! Well played, my friend, well played.

Oh, wow............. That is pretty amazing. You really put a lot of thought and effort into this script. I thought that your stage directions were especially detailed. Sometimes when reading ...