Published September 21, 2012
When Molly's older brother Nate loses his battle with cancer it's up to her to take in seven year old Benjamin. Due to her lack of appearance in the little guys life Benjamin is hostile towards the situation having being made to leave the life he knew behind. Unfortunatly for Molly she knows nothing about taking care of a child, constantly having to rely on others advice.
As neither can undo the situations they've been thrust into they get to know each other and grieve together for a brother and father who left them too soon.
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I'm sensing the begginning of a story! You've got a great start to your plot. There are many different directions that you could go with this. Think about going outside the box. This could turn out to be a really outstnading story. Please let me know when you get the next part up. I'm looking forward to it!
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