Hard as nails and just as smooth Bounty Hunter Myra Grace finds herself seeking the help of ex-lover Kenneth Prophecy to track down a wanted man. When Kenneth had discovered her occupation he'd called them quits. He and the law are not friendly. Seeing her again with fire in her eyes that's from desire as much as the need to catch her bounty he's reluctant to help. His mutual desire is one thing while the secret he keeps could get them killed.
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First of all, I love your use of imagery, and your wording. I think that you could make a great story out of this. Keep in mind how you word some of your sentences, for some of them were awkward. I hope to hear more!
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"Hard as nails and just is smooth" is great but that character has been done many times, you'll need to find something on top of that to make her stand out in the readers mind. "Reluctant to help" is good, presumably he will end up helping, just make sure he doesn't give in too easy, maybe he's forced into it by outside forces(once again avoiding cliche). Not much to go on here, what you have is fine just make sure you make it your own because in all honesty I have read this story before.
Hmmm. This sounds intriguing. If its going to be a dirty romance novel, throw in a curveball like aliens or unicorns or something. People only read those things for one reason.
But, if you want it to be more than just a dirty romance novel, work really hard on your character development.