Rainn

Very nice sweet, simple, yet strong poem. You did a great job with the rhyming and pattern of this, but I noticed the end was a little shaky. I donno, ...

Very nice of you to do a poem about this, my friend. It was truly devastating for said country. I like how you went through a story in this, but ...

Wow. This is amazing. My eyes actually started watering on this....It's so sad and has so much emotion and depth and....amazingniss? Beauty, creativity, and feeling. That is all the review ...

Very...heartfelt poem. I can feel the poem. When I read it I can imagine the loneliness and sadness, but also the small moments of joy. I really like your style ...

This is a really cool poem. I like the imagery you got going. I like how you describe knowledge and how we waste it. The layout of this poem is....cool? ...

This is a very interesting poem, to say the least. XD For the style, I think you did a goo job. It was silly, cute, and kinda random. Although, I ...

Beautiful..... I have nothing to complain about. No criticism. This is a beautiful poem that really gets to the emotion and feeling. This is a deep, heartfelt poem. I really, ...

Wonderfully creative poem, Manisha :) I love the flow and imagery of this piece of work. Nice and crisp, yes? One minor punctuation detail I noticed was the first line ...

Beautiful, sweet, and simple poem you have here. I personally love simplicity. You do a good job of portraying emotion, I can really get it. Even though this poem is ...

Very nice, simple, sweet, poem you have here :) You have a nice rhyming scheme going on, and I like how this poem flows. My favorite part was: "They say ...

You defiantly send a feeling of pain and suffering through this poem, and for that you are a good poet. Other than a few minor spelling errors, this is great.You ...

This is an amazing, heartfelt, beautiful poem. It is masterfully crafted with little need for rhyme. I love the emotion you put into this. You are an amazing poet :) ...

Hello! I have some suggestions to make :) First of all, I liked the first stanza of this poem; how it rhymed, how it flowed. But after that things started ...

Hello Lilyflower! This is a great poem with good imagery and tone. It has nice depth and feel as well. Although, I do suggest you try to format your poem ...

Very intriguing poem. I feel as though it ends to quickly, though. I really like the image you have in it. But I think that you say the word "you" ...