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Very nice, simple, sweet, poem you have here
You have a nice rhyming scheme going on, and I like how this poem flows.
My favorite part was:
"They say love can conquer all,
But is is man's greatest fall."
This part really stuck out to me. It is a beautiful line and it really brings this whole thing together.
Nice job and keep writing!!
~Rainn
Jalmoc,
It is a sad poem that really gives off that emotion that you are seeking for someone. I think you should read through it and try to find mistakes and errors. I saw you used alot of rhyming but the two lines: ' Love is a powerfull thing, So you shouldn't look at it carelessly', doesnt rhyme. I found that interesting that every thing else did besides those two line. But very, very good though. Keep writing. You have true Talent! 
This is a really nice poem