Raindeer

Hello! Wow. So many feelings. I feel anger at this little character, but I also feel anger at Ivy's parents and the doctors for now understanding. I'm slightly confused as ...

Hey again! It definitely has that sinister feel to it once again. Congrats on that. :D I wanted to focus on Ivy's dreams. Whenever I had night terrors as a ...

Hello! This was a bone-chilling story. I had night-tremors (terrors?) as a small child, and they were horrible. In this, you got that "horrible" feeling spot-on. Your imagery of the ...

Hey! Happy Review Day! Let's get this review on. The first thing I noticed was your dialogue. It could be better, formatting wise and with punctuation/proper grammar. However, it does ...

Hello! Ah, those sneaky little pests... Mosquitos. This is very relatable because I'm fairy certain all of us here have been bitten by a mosquito at least once... And they're ...

Hello! Yes, I know the feeling. Sometimes, it's terrible and I completely understand. Other times, though, you have to know that people are just protecting you and trying to keep ...

I thought this was a very nice poem! It had a great tone/voice to it, which is one of the reasons it made it so amazing. Your title fit the ...

Wow. This was a very powerful, meaningful poem. I am sorry for your loss of your friend... that's just terrible. I haven't yet lost a loved one, but I can ...

Ooh! Your imagery was magnificent in this, and the word usage was splendid. But before I get on to the actual review, however, I have a couple small things to ...

Wow. This was amazing. Despite the shortness to it, it was gripping and the metaphor was simple but greatly portrayed. You also had an awesome imagery going on through out ...

Hi! I love all these envy poems going around, they're simply amazing. Your imagery was awesome. You wrote beautiful lines full of beautiful imagery, and you also made it rhyme! ...

Hello, there! You did a nice job with description, the scene was so vivid and I could imagine watching this (or being in the girl's perspective). It was very nicely ...

Ooh, this was fascinating. I loved this. You kept a calm but form voice the entire time I read it, and I didn't feel forced or bored out of my ...

Ooh! That was a little... Hmm? How could I say it? Cruel? Evil? The setting up towards the end was amazing. The beautiful imagery was so detailed and straight to ...

Oh my goodness, this was so sweet! I thought it was amazing that you wrote such a kind poem about your mom - plus, this would make the perfect Mother's ...